Welcome, dear reader, to the contest that gives you a chance to win $100 for your brilliant blog post idea.
Pitchfest has become a highlight of our calendar here at Be a Freelance Blogger because it’s a ton of fun and we’re always excited to see what you come up with.
But the real reason this contest is so popular is the way it works: everything happens in public blog comments, which means you get to see how other bloggers pitch their ideas and how real blog editors respond.
It’s easier to understand if you know the rules, so let’s get straight to that part.
The rules of Pitchfest
- Anybody can enter the contest by typing (or pasting) their pitch into the comments box at the bottom of this page.
- Only ONE PITCH per person, please.
- Follow the pitch format I’ll tell you in a moment.
- After you submit your entry, Sophie Lizard (that’s me, Be a Freelance Blogger’s founder) and/or Lauren Tharp (Be a Freelance Blogger’s guest post editor) will offer feedback to help you optimise your idea for this blog’s audience and improve your pitching skills.
- After you get our feedback, you can revise your pitch if you like and re-submit it by pasting it into a follow-up comment below.
- If you win the $100 prize or a runner-up place, we’ll ask you to send us a draft of at least 1000 words, so bear that minimum word count in mind when you pitch.
- The big winner gets paid $100 for their guest post, on publication, via PayPal.
- Two runners-up get a group mentoring ticket in exchange for their guest post, on publication.
- If the winner’s post can’t go ahead for any reason, we’ll choose a new $100 winner from the runners-up.
The deadline
- Submit your pitch before the end of Thursday, September 4th, 2014.
- We’ll announce the winner and runners-up on September 6th.
- If we choose your pitch, we expect you to deliver your first draft to Lauren by September 20th.
How to pitch
- Read our general guest blogging guidelines first, then come back here to submit your pitch.
- Start your pitch with a headline that makes us say, “Ooh, I want to read that post!”
- Follow the headline with the opening lines you’d use in the post. No less than 30 words, no more than 60. You DON’T need to write a whole post before you pitch — if you win the contest, that’s when we’ll ask you to write your first draft.
- After the opening lines, give us no more than 6 subheadings you’ll use in your post and follow each subhead with one or two sentences outlining the point you’ll make in that section of your post.
- Then tell us in no more than 3 sentences who you are and why you should write this post for Be a Freelance Blogger.
- Put your pitch in the comment box at the bottom of this page.
- Check the little box that says “Notify me of follow-up comments” so you’ll know when we’ve given you feedback.
- Submit your comment and if you followed all the steps above, you’re entered into the contest.
Extra tips
- This time around, we’re paying close attention to your headline and subheads. So put extra thought into those, make them enticing and clear, and feel free to give us several suggested headlines to choose from.
- If you want to get a better idea of what Lauren and I are looking for in your pitch, study the pitches and responses in previous Pitchfests here, here, here and here.
OK, it’s time.
Let the Pitchfest begin! This contest is closed.
Sabita Saleem says
I’m excited to start this off and I hope to learn a lot in here. The earlier pitches had been great so far.
Here’s my idea:
Headline: Want to ditch your Freelance Writing Brain Tattoos? Jump in Right away!
Intro:
Are you sick and tired of your freelance writing moves?
Still soaked in the swamp of “I can’t do it” or even worse “I don’t feel I’ll be able to do this, others are better than me.” (Am I good enough)!
Hmmm…
I just heard you said a BIG YES to all!
Excellent! Why? Because you’ve landed the right spot, so let’s be honest here. Can we at least do that?
Subheadings:
1. Cleanse your mind from the blood sucking vampires
2.Passionately embrace the stunning freelance writing life
3.Learn from the best in business
4.Stop Thinking and Start Writing
5.Celebrate your Small Writing Wins every single day
In this article, I will talk about the mindset that’s a must-have for freelance writing career as compared to a mere side hustle. I will talk about the thought process that hits our mind and puts us down followed by the suggestion to make it work. I’ll use quotes by writing pros and life coaches who focus on rising above mediocrity.
My name is Sabita Saleem, An Organizational Development/Change practitioner turned Freelance writer, advising on personal and professional development. I strongly advocate a winning lifestyle and help business clients solve problems through solutions that actually work.
Hope to hear from you all.
Thanks
Alicia Rades says
I really like this idea, but can I offer some feedback?
I see a lot of different themes here. “Jump right in” makes me think of water, and then you have “tattoos” and “vampires.” I’d suggest picking one theme and sticking to it. I personally think a vampire theme would be super catchy. Maybe you could narrow in on your first point.
I like your intro. I think it really reels and audience in. 🙂
Good luck!
Lynn Silva says
Hi Sabita,
Congratulations on being brave and submitting the first pitch. : ) I’m particularly drawn to your niche and would love to see the finished product include hands on techniques we can implement for each sub-head you mentioned.
I also think Alicia had a great idea with following a theme of ‘vampire’ just given the season.
You did a great job and I look forward to reading this post when it’s complete.
Sabita Saleem says
Thanks Lynn 🙂
It’s lovely to have your word. I’m really excited to participate since it’s my time at Pitchfest, I hope to learn a lot from the wonderful feedback.
Best Wishes to you too!
Sabita Saleem says
Pardon me..
Wanted to mention that it’s my first time at Pitchfest.
Emelia says
Sabita, I would like to read this article. I also think you did a great job with your sub-headings. They are interesting and would make me want to hear your unique voice on those topics.
Sabita Saleem says
Thanks Emeila, feels great to hear from you. I hope to get an opportunity on it and I wish all the best to you 🙂
Looking forward for more feedback. 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Sabita!
My main issue with your pitch is that you keep saying “freelance writing” rather than “freelance blogging.” Our niche here is very strict. Would this article be for writers in general or for freelance bloggers specifically…?
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Lauren!
Well I thought about freelance writing in general but I can definitely be specific to freelance blogging.
I would like to hear more about how I can make it work?
Thanks!
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Lauren,
Please share your feedback on it. I’ve redone the idea and subheads from a blogging perspective.
1.Cleanse your mind from the blood sucking vampires
–I will talk about the negative attitude that stops you from moving ahead.
2.Passionately embrace the stunning freelance blogging life
–Pull this off as a strategy; the long term thing– as passion will bring in the paychecks – quoting Tom Ewer.
3.Learn from the best bloggers in business
–The professional bloggers did this and many didn’t have blogging experience. Learning is ongoing, not just for new but experienced as well. I can quote Carol Tice/Tom Ewer/Sophie here.
4. Stop Thinking and Start Blogging
–Not just restricted to starting your own blog but focusing on blogging gigs alongside but actually blogging. Quoting Robin Sharma – the success coach
5.Celebrate your Small blogging Wins every single day
–Learn from mistakes but keep moving. Enjoy blogging. Record wins to kick you further
Katherine Swarts says
Carol Tice is great. I’ve been on her mailing list and in her Den for ages–and I thank her for first introducing me to the term “content mills” as per my own pitch subhead #5.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Much better, Sabita. 🙂
Sophie Lizard says
Yep, I like the vampire theme too — those pesky ideas that stop people moving forward really are like parasites sucking out your awesomeness.
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Sophie & Lauren,
Here’s the idea colored with vampire theme. Thanks Alicia for mentioning it in the first place.
Headline: Want to ditch Freelance Blogging Vampires –Here’s how!
Intro:
Sick and tired of your freelance blogging moves?
Is your clingy grasping lover still asking: “This is the last time, really, I promise!”
Hmmm…
I just heard you said a BIG YES!
Excellent! Why? Because you’ve landed the right spot, so let’s be honest here.
Your sweet horror blood suckers will keep trying to snatch your blogging blood with their slow insidious prick unless you slay them.
1.Identify how many vampires you feed- Switch on your inner blogging light
-Consider it as a full time job. Identify all aspects like fear, depression etc.
2.Cleanse your mind from the blood sucking vampires – Reclaim your blogging power
– the negative attitude that stops you from moving ahead, stifling your creativity and success
3.Become a passionate vampire slayer – Learn from the best bloggers in business
–The professional bloggers did this and many didn’t have blogging experience. Learning is ongoing, not just for new but experienced as well. I can quote Carol Tice/Tom Ewer/Sophie here.
4.Arm yourself with garlic, holy water and crucifix – Stop Thinking and Start Blogging
–Not just restricted to starting your own blog but focusing on blogging gigs alongside but actually blogging. Quoting Robin Sharma – the success coach
5.Slowly Starve away your vampires – Celebrate your Small blogging Wins every single day
–Learn from mistakes but keep moving. Enjoy blogging. Record wins to kick you further
Looking forward to hear from you.
Alicia Rades says
Wow. Just wow. I think you’ve transformed your pitch into something fantastic. I love your subheads!
Sabita Saleem says
Lovely to have your advice and I’m happy I took it seriously in due time 😉
Thanks a lot for giving your feedback. For somebody like me who just started here, It seems like love at first sight with Pitchfest and BFAB community :D.
Sabita Saleem says
— sorry .. BAFB community 😀
Malithi Weerakkody says
This is great Sabita! Looking forward to read your post :).
Malithi Weerakkody says
And can I make a suggestion? Is there any word you could use in place of “ditch” in your title? Some thing that’s more dramatic, something that goes with your vampire theme? How about “slay”or “chase way” ?
Sabita Saleem says
Thanks for suggesting Malithi. I believe they can be considered as headline options in addition to what I’ve already posted. 🙂
So let’s see.
BetsyM says
Hi Sabita! It’s been great to see the transformation of your pitch! It has come so far and is looking great and I think definitely speaks to the BAFB audience and the tone of this tone in particular. While I’m certainly not one of the BAFB editors (so default to their advice first), as a general blog editor I’d look for a little bit more of a descriptive title. While catchy, I’m not entirely sure what “Freelance Blogging Vampires” are without reading the whole post — and that’s something that readers need to be enticed to click through and read the rest of the post. I’d recommend something like
How to Slay the Freelance Blogging Vampires That Suck Your Motivation Dry — or something along those lines that’s a bit more descriptive.
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Sophie & Lauren
Please say something about my revised pitch colored with vampire theme. It’d be great to have your word to learn more regardless of it being considered or not.
Sabita
Sabita Saleem says
Other suggested headlines are:
Headline 2: Say Good Bye to the last days of average – RIGHT NOW
Headline 3: Is Victory your new Normal – Speak your heart out!
Headline 4: Make your freelance writing career a truly extraordinary adventure
Alicia Rades says
I love Pitchfest! I can’t wait to see the submissions. I will be back here later with an idea.
Adeleye Mahmud says
Headline: 3 Reasons Why You Should not Give Up As a Freelance Writer
Sophie Lizard says
Hi Adeleye, we need to see your whole pitch! Please read the instructions again if you want to submit a valid entry. 🙂
Sabita Saleem says
Thanks for your advice Alicia.
By brain tattoos I meant something that has stuck to the brain and need effort to pull off ( like things mentioned in the intro). I didn’t actually see the vampire angle being that catchy.. 🙂 I guess I should think more on this aspect.
Great to have your word 🙂
Mel says
Hi there,
I’d like to pitch:
Fail Your Way to the Top
You can’t necessarily strut right into your first gig and make a killing, but you can stumble, trip over your own two feet a few times and eventually wind up there.
Does that describe you? Because it sure describes me.
1. Find a side hustle.
When moving into freelancing or any sort of side job, you to narrow down what you want to do with it. What, specifically, do you want to write about? What, specifically, are you going to sell on Etsy?
2. Just do it.
You can easily get bogged down planning and revising, at some point you’ve just got to send your product out into the world. And you should probably expect to send your first product out into the world for next to nothing. And it doesn’t hurt to expect that said product might suck.
3. Find other who do it.
Now look for other travel writers or crafty folks doing cool things with pallets and ask them if you can write for them for free in exchange for some tips or if you can send them your product for their review. Listen carefully.
4. Now just do it a little better.
Go back and take another crack at it. Make sure your second attempt is better than the first attempt. And then continue that trend. Eventually, despite a lot of failures, you’ll finally wind up with a solid product.
My name is Mel and I’m a personal finance blogger with an interest in promoting financial literacy. One of the biggest challenges to everything is mental blocks – from figuring out your budget to freelance writing, so much of life is try and try again.
Thanks for your consideration and looking forward to comments on how to improve!
Mel
Lynn Silva says
Hi Mel!
Love your title! It sucked me right in. It seems like this post would be drop dead honest and therefore very valuable. I want to read the finished product. Great job.
Alicia Rades says
I think this is a really good topic because I feel most–if not all–of us have stumbled on our way to building our freelancing career.
I’d like to suggest–and I know Lauren is going to say the same thing–that you tailor your pitch to freelance blogging specifically.
I don’t know about anyone else, but I’m also a bit confused on how your title relates to your subheads. None of your subhead are really about “failing,” it seems. They seem to talk more about overcoming your fears, which is also a great topic. I would love to read a piece about how you can learn from your mistakes or failures in freelance blogging to bring you to the top. That’s what I would expect out of your title, and I think that would be a fantastic topic.
That’s just my $0.02. Nice pitch!
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
^ Yep. All that stuff Alicia said. 😉
Alternatively, you could talk about how you failed in the areas your subhead describes — yet still succeeded. Or something similar.
Nice pitch, Mel!
Sophie Lizard says
I love the title, but your 1st and 3rd points don’t relate to the overall theme of failure and iteration. To make this post work, you’ll need to figure out whether you’re writing “how to get started” or “how to succeed by trial and error”, and focus on freelance bloggers.
Hope you’ll revise and resubmit this – it sounds like a good one. 🙂
BetsyM says
I LOVE the idea of failure. We don’t hear enough about it and it’s something everyone — even the most successful millionaire on the planet — has experienced.
My recommendation would be to fully embrace the failure theme so it rings true in the whole post, especially the subheads. So instead of “Find a side hustle,” something that touches on why it’s better to fail in a side hustle because it’s not a do-or-die situation, so failure is less of a blow if you make mistakes there.
Sabita Saleem says
Thanks for advising on my idea Betsy. I’m learning how to make things clear yet interesting.
Lorraine Reguly says
I have to say, Mel, that I love the visual of you tripping over your feet and ending up at the top! Humorous and… true. Good concept, but I’m not so sure about your subheads. I think you might have to use a ladder in there somewhere… Perhaps stumble onto an escalator…
Okay, now I’m being a bit silly, but I like that visual, too. 🙂 Imagine tripping, landing on an ascending escalator and then being carried upwards, with no effort whatsoever! THAT would be neat to see!
Craig Martin says
Hi Sophie, Lauren and all the BAFB peeps:
Great timing on the pitchfest — some recent events can help with this piece.
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Title: Avoid Getting Screwed Out of What You’re Worth
It’s a dog-eat-dog world out there.
For freelance writers, no one ever told us that it’s more like a Pitbull-eat-French-Poodle kind of world.
But there are ways to walk away with a few scratches, get paid what you’re truly worth and be confident for the next tussle.
— Dress for the gig you want, not the gig you got
Whether you’re pitching a client in person or from your living room, dress like you *know* you’re a damn good candidate for the gig. Just like smiling or sitting up straight during a phone interview, it allows your professionalism to shine brighter than the gloss on your shoes.
(Blurb about the interview with flip-flop/jandal/thong guy)
— Listen to your gut – especially when it says “HELL NO!”
There are times when prospective clients think they know it all, so they project that vibe and use some dodgy tactics to cut their costs down. If this project sounds like something that a starving college student would run away from, then listen to your gut and decline.
(Blurb about the attempt to make me work as a beat reporter for free)
— Follow up, but only to gauge the level of bullshit
Sometimes you’ll have someone try to slice and dice the budget, only to realize that quality writing/editing/graphic design is a valuable investment, not a cheap expense. Following up can find out if a prospective client is willing to make a reasonable deal.. but it’s also a fun way to learn what bullshit lines they’ll use to “hire” you for far less than what you’re worth.
— Rejection hurts for a while. Suck it up and learn from the experience.
From jobs to clients to girls, I’ve felt the power of rejection hundreds of times. But – as the proverb says – “when you lose, don’t lose the lesson”.
(Blurb about turning a bad interview to something positive)
— It takes some time to find your groove. When you find it, embrace it.
Sometimes it’s the right client, a new season, a loving partner or an exciting challenge. If you find the catalyst that gives you the confidence to handle the next pitbull, embrace that energy and ride the wave.
(Blurb about back to school)
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Hi, I’m Craig, a professional writer/editor who has been floating around in the online freelance world for a while. But now I’m getting a better footing and I’m starting to recognize the mistakes I’ve made (or continue making). By including my first-hand and up-close knowledge, this is why I would make this piece an amazing addition to BAFB’s collection.
Thanks and enjoy the rest of your week!
–Craig
Lynn Silva says
Hi Craig,
I have to say that usually, the beginning of a post is what draws me in. But yours REALLY ‘sealed the deal’ at the quote: “when you lose, don’t lose the lesson”.
I have a feeling this would be an empowering post because you’re willing to humble yourself and share mistakes. Good job and best of luck.
Craig Martin says
Hi Lynn,
Thanks for the kind words! Best of luck to you, too. (BTW, I really like that ‘reversing negative thoughts’ post on your blog.)
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Craig,
I personally feel sharing one’s own story is always a source of learning for others. I wish you all the best. 🙂
Craig Martin says
Hi Sabita,
I agree. And I’m learning quite a bit from your progress with how you’ve been improving your pitch over the past week! Good luck. 🙂
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Craig,
BAFB is a learning platform which is why I intentionally transformed my pitch. It allows you to understand the editor’s perspective.
I would honestly suggest that you at least try writing your pitch from a blogger’s perspective and grab your share of learning and feedback (that’s ok if you wish to be out of race, nobody knows who’ll end up as a winner. But you will learn more from the direct feedback here, so apply it right here right now ). You can definitely post the original one at some other blog or website. :).
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Craig!
This sounds like it would be a great article, but I’m not seeing how/why it would be great for Be A Freelance Blogger…
How would your advice apply to getting freelance blogging work? How would this advice help freelance bloggers from getting screwed out of the rates they deserve?
Alicia Rades says
I really like your intro, particularly “Pitbull-eat-French-Poodle kind of world.”
Don’t get me wrong, I really love your idea, but I agree with Lauren. I’d try to make this more freelance blogger specific.
Sophie Lizard says
Yep, if you narrow it down to freelance blogging this will be a good one. 🙂
Craig Martin says
Hi Lauren, Alicia and Sophie,
Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it.
I see Lauren’s point whether it would be directly focused for BAFB readers. Although I can definitely tweak it and relate it to freelance blogging, if you think it might be better suited for a blog/magazine/publication that deals with freelancing/writing in general, then I’d be willing to step out of the race (and I’d seriously love to hear any suggestions where I should pitch this idea to).
Thanks!
–Craig
Sophie Lizard says
Craig, check out pages 63-69 of the Ultimate List of Better-Paid Blogging Gigs (2014 edition). 🙂
Shanique Dowie says
My Headline: “Stealthily move away from your fear of writing”
Sub headings
“Fear at its best or at its worst”
“Stealthily overcoming the fear of failing as a freelance blogger”.
“Overcoming your rejection demons”.
“Fear at its best or at its worst.”
Fear can be a really intimidating factor that may keep individuals from reaching their potential goal. On the other hand fear can be helpful when you write. Because you fear so much your writing will be rejected you try your best to put out your best work.
“Stealthily overcoming the fear of failing as a freelance blogger”.
If you continue to work in fear of freelance blogging you will never get where you envisioned in your mind. Place the negative voice in your head on mute and grab on to positivity. Get your researches together and pride your work even if you’re not sure, always believe in yourself.
“Overcoming your rejection demons”.
Don’t we all have rejection demons? Its crazy how rejection can turn things around for everyone. We start having self-doubt. That snarky voice is back in your head telling you, you can’t do it because you have been rejected again. Please, save it! What are you going to do now? Are you going to sit and show self-pity or brush yourself off and edit and resubmit your work? Think about it.
About me:
Hi my name is Shanique Dowie. I’ve worked in various call centers over the years and I have developed the understanding of the working world. Now, writing as always been my pass time get away. Transporting me to a different era whenever I wrote. Since I am just starting out and is ready to make writing my career choice, I cannot say I possess any degree or any high achievement in writing. I am confident however that the pieces I have written on various blog websites have been read and liked.
However I am not entering the competition but I would like feedback on my submission above. Feed-backs that can make me get better.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Shanique!
This seems like it would be a nice post… But I’m not really seeing any stand-out differences between your pitch idea and articles we’ve previously published on dealing with rejection. Like this one – http://beafreelanceblogger.com/writer-rejection/ – or this one – http://beafreelanceblogger.com/jedi-freelance-blogging-fear/
What makes your views on rejection special?
Sophie Lizard says
Hi Shanique,
I agree with Lauren’s comment above. Also, I’m concerned that your title and subheads promise the reader a way to escape from fear “stealthily” — yet your outline doesn’t follow up on that promise. What is unusual or new about your tips and in what way do they use stealth?
Chinelo Oputa says
Hi. I was encouraged to partake in this Pitchfest when Sophie said I do not need to be a professional blogger, a published writer, or even have a clue what I’m doing. So here it is.
Headline 1: Are You Beginning Your Freelance Blogging Career in this Environment? Do these
Headline 2: Daily Chores and Freelance Blogging: Is this Your Story? Follow this Guide
Headline 3:Freelance Blogging and Family Life: Is this You? 6 Must Dos
Whether you are male or female, becoming a freelance blogger suggests, though deceptively, that you would have more time for your family than your office-worker partner. Watch this scene.
You wake up early to get the kids ready for school. After that, you turn to the house to do some sweeping and cleaning.
■ 1: Get an office
■ 2: Treat your career as a regular job
■3: Make Time your boss
■ 4: Plan for your home and kids
■ 5: Have daily schedule of chores and make your partner partake
■ 6: Accomplish one blog writing task daily
All of the subtopics are actionable points that will increase the productivity of the freelance blogger right from the start of their career, regardless of the workload of daily chores. I will support those points with quotes from established freelance bloggers on the topic and with my own first hand experience.
I am Chinelo Oputa, a freelance blogger who has only been ghostwriting for blogs. But since I quit working from home and followed those same steps I outlined above, I have started achieving more in my career on daily basis. This post will benefit freelance bloggers who are yet to place a clear dividing line between their career and family responsibilities, especially beginners who are deceived with the ‘work from home’ myth.
Alicia Rades says
I would definitely read an article on this topic. I know there are lots of articles on the topic already, but yours could be particularly strong if you shared fresh, actionable tips under each subhead. I always like reading people’s personal tips for productivity.
Chinelo Oputa says
Hi Alicia.
Thanks for your comments. I was really waiting to hear how awful my pitch sounded.
Well, I know this is a popular topic and I don’t trust myself to be so awesomely different. But I thought of sharing my personal tips (which might not be exclusive to me afterall!) And presenting those in a way to inspire, I hope freelance bloggers might find the post uniquely useful.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Chinelo!
I wasn’t really feelin’ your title choices, but, if I’m being honest, titles/headlines have always been my weakest area as a writer. So I can’t be too hard on you. 😉
That said, I really like your topic choice. We haven’t had a good productivity article on BAFB in a while. So long as it’s tailored specifically toward freelance bloggers then it could be interesting.
My only concern is that your sub-heads seem a bit…easy. For example, sub-head number 1 is “Get an Office.” What more can be said about that that isn’t filler…? Guest posts have an 800-word minimum, but each of those words has to be useful (or entertaining) to our readers.
Do you have a new/fresh take on “get an office?” (Ways to find cheap office space, methods for creating a home office, etc.).
Productivity articles are a blessing and a curse for writers. They’re a blessing because nearly every editor, depending on the niche, is inclined to take a look (I know we are!). They’re a curse because since it’s a topic that’s been done so many times, you have to try extra hard to make yours stand out from the crowd!
So how are you going to make your productivity article — for freelance bloggers! — different from anything I’ve ever seen before? Because, as someone who’s bogged down with more than her fair share of daily chores, I’d love a little help — but only if it’s going to be stimulating to the other BAFB readers as well. 😉
Chinelo Oputa says
Hi Lauren.
Thanks so much for this very honest feedback. I guess I’d need some help to create an effective title. That’s one of the side effects of ghostwriting — the assignments come with pre-written titles that can’t be changed by me.
I really have some fresh ideas to share on this topic (or so I think!). And a revisiting of the old ideas with a fresh pair of glasses wouldn’t be that bad, would it?
Now, I’ve tried to rewrite the subheads.
■ Give your neighbourhood something to chew
I’ll discuss how getting an office outside your home will increase your productivity even though many people think otherwise because of cost implications.
■ Lets face it – You’ve got JOBS
Freelance blogging is not an office job that demands you work from 8 am to 5 pm. If anything, it’s worse than that!
■ Employ a boss
Getting a boss to keep you on your toes will definitely help your career, only you don’t have to worry about his salary.
■ Let your kids rule their world
I’ll talk about the kind of plan you could make to take care of your children whenever they’re not in school so that you’d have the desired length of time to work.
■Draw up your chores map
I’ll discuss how to handle chores so they don’t get in the way of your freelance blogging career.
■ Do the WRITE thing daily
This is going to conclude the piece in an inspiring way urging freelance bloggers to blog daily and to stick to the steps with steadfastness, which means doing the right thing on daily basis.
Please let me know if this improves my pitch. And I’ll like to say ‘thank you’ to Sophie for this wonderful workshop of a kind. I’m glad to have joined.
Sophie Lizard says
Hi Chinelo,
The balance of work and family is difficult for a lot of BAFB readers, so your choice of topic is good. And I think your 3rd headline option is closest to the mark.
I’m not “getting” your subheadings in your revised pitch — they need make it clear what you’ll discuss in each section, so that someone skimming through the post will stop and read the most helpful sections. Try to keep each subhead to no more than 6 words or so, and concisely sum up the subtopic of the section in a compelling way.
BetsyM says
I also like this topic because it’s something a lot of us struggle with. Sure, we’d all be amazing freelance bloggers if we had all day to blog and nothing else to do! But we also have other priorities (aka life) and we need to find how to make time to be the most productive bloggers AND family members AND friends AND everything else we can be. It sometimes feels like an impossible challenge!
I second the other advice in this thread. Hone in on your focus in the subhead and strive to give actionable, unique tips. For example “get an office…” How can you get creative here? Create a designated space somewhere in your home, even if a teeny corner desk in your bedroom? Just riffin’ here! You could go a lot of ways with this.
Good luck!
Chinelo Oputa says
Hi Betsy. Thanks for your input. Indeed, I am marvelled at the collaboration going on in this forum. It doesn’t look anything like a contest. This is quite remarkable.
Anyway, I have updated my pitch, focusing on a different angle though. You may check it out. I hope you’re not disappointed about the change of approach.
Chinelo Oputa says
Thanks Sophie for the feedback. I think I want to take a different angle.
Title: 6 Reasons Why Renting an Office Will Boost Your Freelance Blogging Career
Freelance blogging has had the work at home tag for too long. And because of the relative comfort which follows working from home, freelance bloggers find it difficult to step out of their comfort zone, especially since it comes with heavy financial implications. But what they do not know is that getting an office away from home has enormous advantages.
■ Career expansion
Many, if not all, freelance bloggers have acquired other skills apart from the freelance blogging skill. They cannot practice these other skills in their bedroom like they do freelance blogging. But moving out will give them the opportunity to also practice some of these skills. Iron sharpens iron. Practicing those skills will positively affect their freelance blogging one way or the other.
■ Development of a goal-getting attitude
Given that payment of rent is involved, they will become time conscious and proactive. They will not only work to meet deadlines. They have rent to pay too! Necessity becomes the mother of invention. They will invent strategies to meet their goals.
■ Better planning for home and kids
Because they need to leave their home every workday, they will be more inclined to make adequate plans for their family.
■ Increase in family collaboration
Since they and their partner leave home every weekday for work, there’ll be greater collaboration in handling the chores when they all return. No one will be yawning with tiredness, expecting the other to take care of every chore simply because they had been out all day while their partner had been in, and possibly sleeping.
■ Neighborhood Marketing
Freelance bloggers are spending money marketing their brand on the internet. Meanwhile, their next door neighbor who needs a blogger may not know they are professionals at that. Naturally, the office will market their brand in that locality.
■ Greater focus results in career growth
Because of the ultimately pressure from rent payment and other expenses, there’ll be greater focus which will in turn bring them freelance blogging success.
Please let me know what you think about this update. Thank you.
Chinelo Oputa says
Pardon me, I meant ‘ultimate pressure’.
Burlingtina Vines says
How to Blog Better with 5 SMART Techniques
What does blogging and project management have in common? Goals. SMART is an acronym for specific, measurable, attainable, relevant, and time-based. It’s used by project managers in big business. But what does this have to do with you? Each letter is a technique that can take make your readers think you’re a genius.
1. Specific: Narrowing down your topic for your audience
Techniques to focus your posts to your audience
2. Measurable: Exactly what this post will do for your audience
Showing your audience how your post can enhance their lives
3. Attainable: Making your topic something your readers can do
Providing step-by-step suggestions and other ways to make things easier
4. Relevant: Double-checking that your post is something that your audience wants to read
Researching to make sure your audience is interested in your topic
5. Time-based: How long it will take your audience to see the result of your advice
Explaining how much time it takes for your topic to help them
What Makes Me Qualified
I’m a freelance writer with a business degree that focused on corporate management. I use these techniques to fuel my writing skills and empower my clients in the marketplace. I would love to power up your readers with corporate-level business savvy.
Lynn Silva says
Great idea. I love how this correlates with SMART. : )
Lorraine Reguly says
SMART is an acronym used by many. This idea is not 100% unique, Sophie, so I’d question how this could be related to freelancing…
That’s my two cents.
FYI, I’d like to offer up a post on freelance editing, and how it has helped me earn more with my freelance writing.
Burlingtina Vines says
Hello Lorraine,
Thank you for your comments.
Burlingtina
Burlingtina Vines says
Hi Lorraine and Lynn,
I hit the post button too quickly. I want to thank both of you for your comments. SMART is an older technique. I’ve never seen it applied to freelance writing the way I do it. I usually see it applied to projects. But the same idea applies to freelancing. I think I need to to explain it better in a revised edition.
Thank you very much,
Burlingtina
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Burlingtina!
SMART is soooooooooooooo old news… *yawn*
How can you make SMART “fresh” again? If you’re going to bring an old idea to the table, you have to have a new take on it!
You’re right: SMART is usually applied to project management. So how can you make it apply to freelance blogging? (Note: It has to be both — freelancing and blogging — not just freelancing!)
If you have a way to make this moldy old idea FRESH again then I would love to read it! Honestly! Nothing pleases an editor more than a fresh take on a classic topic. 😉
However, you’ll have to try extra hard to “wow” us if you’re going to pull this off! Are you up to the challenge? If you are, then leave a more-detailed version of your pitch as a reply. But, remember: It has to be relevant to freelance blogging!
Burlingtina Vines says
Hello Lauren,
Thanks so much for the feedback! I agree with your comments. Next time, I’ll make sure that I present the topic so that it totally fits the audience and the tone, while making it useful and fun.
I’ll see you guys in the next Pitchfest.
Burlingtina
Katherine Swarts says
After the talk about the SMART acronym being a cliche, I can’t resist sharing this article I found that created a different acronym for goal-setting. (Even if you don’t share the writer’s religious-based perspective, the acronym is worth a look.)
http://rickwarren.org/devotional/english/how-to-set-a-faith-goal
Derek Thompson says
How about SHARP goals?
Singular, Holistic, Ambitious, Reasoned and Practical.
S = A defined objective that can also be a subset of a larger goal.
H = All implications and impacts considered.
A = Stretches you and demonstrably furthers your ambitions.
R = You understand the reasons (motivations) behind it and you’ve reasoned out the objective itself – to make sure it’s viable for you.
P = You know (or can define) and are able to deliver on the steps necessary to achieve the goal.
I’m happy if anyone wants to use this (a name check and blog link would be nice though!)
Alicia Rades says
I’m feeling the same way about SMART, although I usually see it applied to goals, not blogging, so I can see where you’re taking a “fresh” approach.
In the future, I think it’d be really neat to see what you come up with that relates to your background in business. I think there’s a lot you probably learned in your program that you can pass on to freelance bloggers.
Sophie Lizard says
I think our readers probably know what SMART stands for, but they may never have thought to use it when writing a blog post. If you bring a unique perspective to the done-to-death topic, this could be an interesting post. 🙂
Remember too that we’re talking about *freelance* bloggers, so you might want to add info on how SMART applies to pleasing your clients as well as your readers.
Burlingtina Vines says
Hello Sophie,
Thanks for your feedback! You’re completely right. I leaned too much on the blogging part and not enough on the freelancing. I’ll get the mix right next time so it helps out on both sides of the freelance blogging coin.
Looking forward to the next Pitchfest!
Burlingtina
Burlingtina Vines says
Hello Alicia,
Thank you for your comments. I agree that I have more topics up my sleeve. I just have to make sure to apply it directly in a way that fits the audience and rocks the socks off of everyone.
See you in the next Pitchfest.
Burlingtina
Laura Yeager says
Dear Sophie Lizard:
Your frequent notes of encouragement and freelance guidance are wonderful. Thank you for keeping me in the freelancing loop. I’ve considered entering your Pitchfest, but was too intimidated to until now. See pitch below:
“Turn Your Misfortune into Bucks”
People with illnesses can and should blog about their illness. MS, cancer, asthma, diabetes, heart disease, schizophrenia—any kind of illness is fair game. I recently recovered from breast cancer. I plan to write about this experience just as soon as I have enough distance on it.
Years ago, I wrote a blog on bipolar illness for empowher.com, a women’s health website. I wrote two bipolar posts a week and was paid $25 for each post. I kept up the blog for six months. During this time, I learned a great deal about myself and my issue. I would encourage anyone with an illness or disease to consider writing about it.
There are several benefits of writing about your illness.
USING YOUR EXPERTISE
In many ways, you’re an expert on the malady. You might not be a doctor, but you have priceless experience in living with the disease.
BEING A GOOD NEIGHBOR
You can help others deal with their illness issues. What better way is there to reach out to struggling sick people?
KNOWING THYSELF
Writing about your problem helps you cope with it. It’s pretty much a known fact; writing helps people deal with their life issues.
MAKING MAGIC
You can put your own spin on the sickness, choosing to make it funny or intensely black or somewhere in between. Presto!
GETTING BACK
It’s nice to receive something from the universe for having to endure a disease i.e. cash. Every little bit helps.
RECEIVING WONDERFUL SURPRISES
You’ll discover new knowledge about your illness. In the process of dealing with what you know best, you’ll learn more.
I’ve been writing for more than 30 years, and I’ve been living with bipolar illness since 1991. I developed breast cancer in 2011. I have the writing ability, experience and expertise to write this post for you.
Sophie, I hope you’d like to help me turn this idea into a reality.
Sincerely,
Laura Yeager
Lynn Silva says
Hi Laura,
The topic of illness touches my heart. I think you’re on to something here. I would LOVE to see this post connect how you can take the struggles of dealing with an illness and sink them into being a better blogger. THAT is, for me, a VERY hot topic.
Alicia Rades says
This is a great, unique topic! I like it. 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Looks good, Laura. 🙂
Sophie Lizard says
I like it. One thought: your title promises bucks/fortune so I’d like to see more in your outline about where & how the reader can get paid for their health-related writing. 🙂
Laura Yeager says
I came up with a better headline for my pitch above:
“Turn Your Misfortune into Fortune”
Laura Yeager
BetsyM says
Excited to enter Pitchfest! My pitch is about pitching. 🙂
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Headline:
Mastering the Art of Freelance Blogging: The 10 Commandments of Pitching Blog Editors
Intro:
What does a day in your life as successful freelance blogger look like? Do you dream of writing clever and witty blog posts from your couch all day? Do clients come out of the woodwork and throw you piles of money for your words?
Keep dreaming.
Making bank as a freelance blogger starts with mastering the art of pitching editors.
Subheads:
1. Thou shall write a strong subject line
2. Thou shall do your research
3. Thou shall not write insanely long emails
4. Thou shall follow directions
5. Thou shall not be lazy
6. Thou shall not assume it’s personal
About me:
I’m both a freelance blogger and editor who has worked on both sides of the pitching coin — which is both blessing and a curse. Ultimately all the bad and good pitches I’ve received (and have written) have made me both a better writer and editor because I know what to look for and what to avoid.
Thanks for your consideration and I look forward to your feedback Sophie and Lauren!
Lynn Silva says
Awww bummer! You left us hanging for the last four!!!! Great job! : )
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Betsy!
Normally I’d gripe about the title saying “10” and the outline having 6; however, I understand why you had to cut your pitch short (way to stick to the rules! haha). 😉
Here’s the thing… Your pitch is still a bit vague. The whole “10 Commandments” thing feels more like a gimmick than an actual outline.
Gimmick aside, looking at your subheads makes me concerned your post might be a little too similar to this: http://beafreelanceblogger.com/guest-post-rejection
However, your author bio has me curious… It’s always interesting to get a fresh perspective on things! (It’s interesting that you’ve been on both sides of the pitching process). Perhaps a more-detailed pitch is in order…?
BetsyM says
Thanks for the feedback!
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
You’re welcome! 🙂 And I mean it: Please feel free to leave a comment that elaborates on your initial pitch — if you feel up to sharing a few more details about how you’d make your guest post stand out from the rest, please do!
BetsyM says
Here’s my revised pitch! After reading all of the other links on BAFB on this topic (I should have done that before! I didn’t follow my own advice!), I realized that a post solely dedicated to pitching is not very fresh for this audience. So my revised pitch incorporates the art of the pitch to some encouraging tips for newbie bloggers. I know the rules said one pitch per person, so I am not sure if I am abiding by them, but I thought it was worth a shot!
Headline:
How Launching Your Freelance Blogging Career is Like Training for a Marathon
Intro:
If I had a quarter for every time I’ve heard “it’s not a sprint, it’s a marathon,” then I’d be set on laundry money for life.
People love using the marathon analogy for just about everything — for dieting, for getting out of debt, and yes, even for launching your freelance blogging career.
Subheads:
Pros have already paved the path to success
Some days really suck for no reason at all
It’s harder to bounce back from burnout than to prevent it
The only way to get better is to keep doing it
No one’s gonna MAKE you run — or blog
You work up to big mileage — and the big bucks
About me:
I’m both a freelance blogger and editor. Some would say I am living the freelance blogging dream because I was able to build up my freelance blogging to the point where I could quit my full-time job. But this was not an easy road, and I still have to work for it! I look forward to writing a post where I can offer some advice to how to launch and grow your freelance blogging business.
Alicia Rades says
I really like your take on this, but like Lauren said, I’ve seen so many articles about pitching on BAFB.
Some examples:
http://beafreelanceblogger.com/freelance-writing-pitch/
http://beafreelanceblogger.com/blog-pitch-audition/
http://beafreelanceblogger.com/how-to-pitch-blog-editors/
http://beafreelanceblogger.com/perfect-blog-pitch/
As you can see, that topic has been covered pretty thoroughly here.
However, that said, I would definitely read this article elsewhere and would love to see what kind of creativity comes from it.
I think you still have a good shot if you follow Lauren’s advice.
Jon says
Blog idea – overcome writers block.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Jon!
Your pitch is a bit…short. Try referring back to the beginning of this post, and I “quote” (copy/paste):
How to pitch:
1. Read our general guest blogging guidelines first, then come back here to submit your pitch. http://beafreelanceblogger.com/guest-blogging-guidelines/
2. Start your pitch with a headline that makes us say, “Ooh, I want to read that post!”
3. Follow the headline with the opening lines you’d use in the post. No less than 30 words, no more than 60. You DON’T need to write a whole post before you pitch — if you win the contest, that’s when we’ll ask you to write your first draft.
4. After the opening lines, give us no more than 6 subheadings you’ll use in your post and follow each subhead with one or two sentences outlining the point you’ll make in that section of your post.
5. Then tell us in no more than 3 sentences who you are and why you should write this post for Be a Freelance Blogger.
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Betsy,
Your idea is very interesting. I wish you and everyone else all the best for their pitches.
I would really appreciate if you share your views about my idea. It will give me an opportunity to learn more.
Thanks
Joe says
We are Hiring Every Day
Pick and choose companies that are looking for answers to their marketing and sales problems and discover companies that want to make a change.
SubHeadings
Using Indeed.com as part of your daily marketing system
How to customize your search for your type of client
Determine which companies are right for you
Use the hiring process to find the contact person for you
My name is Joe Large and I use Indeed.com every day to discover companies that consider taking a different approach to their sales/marketing with content that engages, informs and delivers more prospects. Over 20 million visitors per week go to Indeed.com. and I know how to leverage that knowledge for writers, bloggers and other content producing companies.
Lynn Silva says
I REALLY want to read this post! It sounds AWESOME!
Lynn Silva says
Wowwww! I haven’t heard of anything like this. It’s new and fresh and really has sparked my interest! I want to read it!
Alicia Rades says
I agree with Lynn. I think this is a very unique topic that would do great on BAFB.
Might I offer some constructive criticism, though? I feel your headline needs to be much stronger. It doesn’t really tell me what I’m going to read about. It sounds more like a job ad than a blog post. I think this is a great topic for freelance bloggers, but I don’t see any mention of freelance blogging in your pitch.
I’m also not sure if you understood the instructions, but Sophie and Lauren are looking for the first 30-60 words of your actual piece for the introduction section. They want to know if you can capture an audience or not.
I still think this is a great topic. I would definitely read it.
Joe says
Thanks for the kind words. Should I revise headline and first sentence and resubmit on this forum.? Wasn’t sure what I should do next?
Thanks,
Joe
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Joe!
Yeah… I actually almost skipped over your pitch because I thought you were spam. :\
Please feel free to reply to your initial pitch with a re-draft! Follow the pitching instructions listed in the rules and give it another go. It has to be the same topic though (only one pitch/idea per contest, per person!).
Malithi Weerakkody says
Hi, I am new to the community and the blogging world as well, but though I’d give this a shot. Guessing from previous PitchFests, I’d get a lot of constructive criticism even if I don’t win. 🙂 So it’ll be a great opportunity either way. Here goes my pitch.
Title: Not a native English writer? That’s exactly why you should start a blog!
Opening lines: “English is a crazy language”, says Richard Lederer. And I agree.
English is one of the biggest roadblocks we have to face as writers who are not native English. As much as we crave to be successful as freelance writers, we feel apprehensive about using a language which is not our mother tongue
Sub heads:
Here’s how a blog will improve your English language skills:
1. You will write consistently
2. You will get a chance to participate in discussion with native English writers
3. You will read a lot
4. You will receive feedback on your writing
5. You get to make friends with people all over the world
*I’ll explain each point in detail when I write the article.
A few other tips that will help
1. Think in English
2. Watch English movies and listen to English songs (will improve your listening and speaking- a skill that will be invaluable while dealing with clients ) etc.
You can do it!
*I’ll give a few examples of non-native English bloggers and writers who’ve tasted success.
Well, that’s it. Your comments mean so much to me :). thanks
Chinelo Oputa says
Hi Malithi,
I really like your idea. Starting a blog will definitely give the non-native speakers the confidence of the natives. But that will come only if they are passionate about it and work hard. But I believe that’s what your post sets out to achieve, talking about inspiring them.
I wish you luck.
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks Chinelo. Yes, we have to be passionate about blogging to get any good result. But isn’t that true for everything we do? 🙂
Good luck to you too! 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Malithi!
It’s a nice pitch, but I feel like it’s already been done… Right here, in fact: http://beafreelanceblogger.com/esl-bloggers/
That post was actually our Pitchfest winner from April 2014!
Like I said… Good pitch. It’s just five months too late.
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks Lauren. 🙂 I actually came across Jovell’s article when I searched the blog before submitting my pitch.
I thought Jovell’s took a different angle from mine. While she discusses about how to land clients, I am talking about how we can improve our English writing skills through blogging.
Perhaps the way I worded my pitch was not that clear. I’ll try to explain it a bit further:
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Here’s how a blog will improve your English language skills
1. You will write consistently- Starting a blog is the perfect motive to write consistently. Practice makes perfect they say.
2. You will get a chance to participate in discussions with native English speakers – Replying to the comments on your own blog and commenting on other blogs will improve your communication skills in English.
Typically, there’s a lot of discussions going on in the comments section in any blog. Mostly these discussions resemble real-life interaction.
Pay attention to how the other commenters structure their sentences. It’s a great opportunity to pick up language phrases and expressions.
3. You will read a lot – In order to write your posts, you’ll have to read a lot. Reading books and other blogs written in English will definitely improve your English.
4. You will receive feedback on your writing – Often, your readers will notice your mistakes. And most of them will offer feedback whether you like it or not. Take note and learn from them. A good strategy is to gently ask your readers for feedback on your language use.
5. You get to make friends with people all over the world – Once you become a blogger you will automatically be a part of a huge global community. Make friends with the fellow bloggers. Send them a polite email introducing yourself and follow up on a regular basis. Most of them will happily reply as long as you don’t stalk.
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Well, what do you think now? 🙂 This is my very first pitch, I obviously have a long way to go 🙂 Thanks again.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Much better, Malithi. 🙂 Just make sure you show the readers how this information applies to their freelance blogging careers, not just writing in general.
Sophie Lizard says
This is excellent advice for anyone who wants to improve their English (including those of us who have it as a first language and *still* get things wrong). But like Lauren pointed out, your readers here at BAFB will be freelance bloggers who are looking to make money from their writing skills — how will you address their specific hopes and fears?
P.S. For a first pitch, this was pretty good. Keep practicing and even if you don’t win this contest, you’ll be able to win paying gigs elsewhere. 🙂
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks Sophie. Yes, I get what you mean. What I’ve focused here mostly applies to beginners; I haven’t specifically addressed the issue of making money out of it.
The thing is, being a newbie, I don’t have much insight into that matter. I only have a bunch of ideas I’ve gained through reading various sources. I don’t think I’ll be comfortable writing about something that I don’t know firsthand. So I guess I’ll let this chance pass. But I’ll try again, when I have something truly valuable to offer 🙂
By the way, thank you sooooo much for the encouragement. It means so much for me 🙂
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks Lauren 🙂 . I’ll keep it in mind if I get a chance to publish the post here.
Alicia Rades says
I feel this is a great topic, but I thought the exact same thing as Lauren. I hope you publish elsewhere if your pitch isn’t accepted.
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks Alicia. 🙂 As I explained to Lauren, I tried to take a different path from Jovell. But I’m not sure if it worked.
Yeah, that’s a good idea to try somewhere else if this isn’t accepted. (I don’t have much hopes any way, this is my very first pitch 🙂 )
Neal Pritchett says
English is a crazy language. You say that like it’s a bad thing.
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks for the feedback Neal. Actually, it’s just the opposite. I happen to love English very much. 🙂
In his article, Richard Lederer makes fun of English language. Read this, you’ll love it. http://www.goodreads.com/quotes/622763-let-s-face-it—english-is-a-crazy-language-there.
Malithi Weerakkody says
Oops, just saw that I haven’t included the description about myself. 😮
I am a scientist-turned-writer. Unable to resist the allure of written words, I abandoned my career as a Research Scientist and became a Freelance Writer. Being a non-native English writer myself, I’d love to help out those writers who are trying to conquer the language monster.
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Malithi,
Would like to share that English is not my first language as well. But freelancing had always been quite interesting for me. I ghostwrite and am now focusing on guest posting for exposure. Sophie’s blog appears like a one-stop platform 🙂
It’s definitely going to be an enriching experience for you. I wish you all the best. 🙂
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thank you Sabita. 🙂
Yes, Sophie does a very good job of helping us newbies, doesn’t she? I’m learning a lot and my confidence level has definitely gone up since I became a member. I’m so glad I found this blog. And the community here is so friendly and welcoming too.
Thanks again. All the best to you too. 🙂
Sarah Anton says
Hey guys!
Excited for the Pitchfest as it’s my first one!
______________________________
Headline: 6 Reasons You Should Become A Blogger
Intro:
The internet is taking over as people are getting lazier. The population today prefers to stay in front of a computer rather than go outside to chat with the world, which is our open door to make money.
Blogging is our chance of making generation Y feel like their socializing.
Subheadings:
Here’s what’s awesome about being a blogger:
1. You get to brag about working in your PJs: you work comfortably from home while others attack the stressful commute.
2. You can share your opinion without setbacks: blogging is about sharing your opinion and people love you for it!
3. You become more knowledgable than others: as you get hired by bigger clients, you get to research on more important and serious topics.
4. You can join the awesome blogging community: everybody is crazy and loveable, why wouldn’t you want to join it?
5. You talk with clients from all over the world: you connect with individuals who’s stories are phenomenal!
6. You have the chance to become “Blogger Famous”: probably not at Perez Hilton’s level but as you grow in your blogging career, so will your name.
Bio:
I’ve been a blogger for three years now and only decided to monetize my business when I realized how much I loved being home. Being a blogger is amazing, yet many people are afraid of leaving their 9-5 jobs because they conform to what society thinks is the norm. It’s time to change that! For the past year, I’ve written content on fitness, health and business and found myself through the power of words.
Lorraine Reguly says
“Blogging is our chance of making generation Y feel like their socializing.”
While I really like this concept, you made a typo in this sentence.
“They’re” easy to see… 😉 Well, the one is! 🙂
Alicia Rades says
Sarah,
This is a really nice pitch.
My only piece of criticism is that I don’t see it resonating with BAFB readers. This piece seems very focused on blogging, but not FREELANCE blogging. I feel most BAFB readers have already decided to become a blogger–or freelance blogger–so it’s kind of like we’re taking a step back here.
That being said, I think this piece would do very well on a different website with a different target audience. You did a great job with your pitch! It would be cool to see what happens if you pitch the idea somewhere else.
But I’m not one of the judges for Pitchfest, so good luck!
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Sarah!
This is a cute idea but I have a few problems with it:
1. I really liked the “Gen Y”/Millennials angle in the intro… But you don’t really go anywhere with it. I was kinda hoping to see a “Gen Y” take on freelance blogging — like an article I’d find at Career Meh or We Will Defy, but from a freelance blogging perspective. That’d be so cool! But, alas; such was not the case.
2. The sub-heads feel way too easy/general. I’d be concerned about you meeting the 800-word minimum for guest posts. (Those 800 words have to be “filler free,” you know!).
3. While you nailed the blogging aspect, there didn’t seem to be anything about freelancing. For it to be a true BAFB post, it has to cover both — after all, it’s in our name! (Be A Freelance Blogger)
But, I don’t know. I can’t help but see potential here. If you could tweak your pitch to have more of a freelance blogging perspective, then maybe we’d have something. 🙂 After all, you said in your bio that you’ve been able to monetize your own work! Why not share a few tricks with our readers?
Sophie Lizard says
What Alicia and Lauren said. 🙂 If you’ve found good ways to monetise a personal blog, there’ll be a ton of people who want to hear about it — but here on this blog, they’ll expect it to be freelance blogging related.
BetsyM says
Might this topic be preaching to the choir? I’d think that BAFB readers already know they want to become freelance bloggers! So they don’t need to be convinced. 🙂
I’d love to hear more about how you monetized your blog as well! What’s your ‘secret’? How did you do it? How can the rest of us learn from you and do the same for our blogs?
Lynn Silva says
Hi Malithi!
Welcome to the blogging world. This is the perfect community to glean great advice from. : ) This is a very well thought out post and I can tell that you put a lot into it. Pitching is scary at first and sometimes the critiques are difficult to stomach, but the critiques are the BEST places to learn and improve from. Best of luck and looking forward to seeing your posts in the very near future. : )
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks Lynn. You are right, this community is perfect for newbies like myself to grow. I’m glad to be a part of it.
Yes, the idea of pitching does scare me. But I’m going to do it any way. After all, I’ve got nothing to lose, do I? 🙂
By the way, I must say that I see some great pitches here and many helpful comments. I’m learning a lot from these, thanks Sophie.
Sabita Saleem says
I totally agree with Lynn on this. It’s a learning opportunity and BAFB is a great platform since you get to have the candid feedback through comments.
Aisha Sulaiman says
Hello everyone, it is always a great pleasure to mingle with “write minds”. I find it interesting learning new ways of pitching and getting to see what others are doing right or wrong. So here’s my pitch
Title 1:5 Awesome ways of showcasing recommendations you received on your site.
Title 2: Wanna showcase your recommendations to clients: 5 creative ways to get this done.
Intro: As a writer it feels so good when we are able to make our clients happy, and wish we could capture the joy of the client frame it and display for all to see. It is however sometimes difficult getting recommendations because clients are too busy to give you one.
There is however a solution to this problem and several options you can explore to capture the feelings of your “happy client” will be discussed.
Subheads
1. Quotes
2. Audio
3. Social media recommendation.
4. Using banners
5. Email snippets
Each method will be explained and further research will be done giving live examples of writer websites with creative recommendations on their website. I will also look at the possibility of expanding the list to 10 ways.
Good luck to all my fellow pitchfesters!
About me:
I am a freelance content writer with a passion for research. I have written several articles both as a ghostwriter and under my name. I also love helping others and am always on the look out to grow my network. I hope to pass on knowledge I have gained over the years as a writer to anyone willing to learn.
Alicia Rades says
I think this is a great topic freelance bloggers can learn a lot from. Nice pitch!
Aisha Sulaiman says
Thank you Alicia 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Looks good, Aisha! This is something all freelance bloggers need, but we don’t have any articles on this specifically yet.
Sophie Lizard says
Aisha, I love this idea (and I’m impressed that you’ve narrowed it down to a single aspect of website content) but as we’re looking for winning headlines and subheadings in this Pitchfest, I feel like there’s still room for improvement in your pitch.
I hope you’ll take another shot at making the headline and subheads more enticing — this is definitely a topic I’d like to see covered. 🙂
Aisha Sulaiman says
Good to hear that Lauren thanks!
Aisha Sulaiman says
Thank you Sophie for your recommendations, I am adding an Update to my pitch.
Alternate headline
Title 3: 5 Ways to showcase your recommendations and wow new clients
Title 4:5 Creative ways to showcase your recommendations and win over more clients
Title 5: How to showcase your recommendations and impress new clients.
Headlines:
1.Writing out quotes from past clients
2. Dislaying recorded recommendations in form of audio
3. Display accolades from clients on social media
4.Use of Rotatory banners to capture multiple recommendations
5. Screen capture of recommendations in e-mail snippets
Lorraine Reguly says
Here’s my official pitch!
Headline:
Save Your Editor Some Time: Perfect Your Post Prior To Submission
Editors exist for a reason, but that’s NOT to re-write your writing! It’s to make your writing PERFECT. Perfection, however, can mean different things…
Subheads:
1. What Ticks Editors Off
– Editors love ________ but dislike ______
2. Making a Good Impression With Your Writing: How to Do It
– A list of short steps (not more subheads!) that you can take to ensure you make a good impression on your editor.
3. How You Can Edit Your Own Work
– A list of things you can do (yes, more subheads here!) to edit your own writing, easily.
4. The Pleasure is Theirs
– Ties all subhead points together, leads to next one, which is conclusion of post.
5. Repeat Assignments: Getting More Work, Not Doing It Over!
– How following these points will garner you more work, leading to less work for the editor.
I’m the best person to write this type of post because I’m both a writer and a freelancer. I’ve seen both sides of the coin, and can relate well to the subject matter. BAFB’s audience would love this type of post for the simple fact that it’d be useful! (DUH!)
My name is Lorraine Reguly. I’m many things – teacher, author, freelancer, poet, writer, editor, and blogger. My sites are Wording Well, Laying It Out There, and Poetry Perfected.
I’m also offering free editing of a blog post to a lucky “winner” this month on Wording Well! (I’ll likely continue this contest each month from here on out, too.) 😉
Read “Want Some FREE Editing from Yours Truly?” for more details.
I look forward to writing this post for YOU, Sophie! (Surely, Lauren will love me for it.) 😉
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Lorraine!
So long as you tailor this post to be about/for freelance bloggers (not just freelance “writers” in general) then I am all for it! 😀 Well done.
Little iffy on the advertisement at the end, but I’ll let it slide…
Lorraine Reguly says
Sometimes I like to push to see how much I can get away with. 🙂
Feel free to remove it. You’re the editor, after all!
And yes, I did that on purpose. 😉
Lynn Silva says
Lorraine,
Your pitch is very well thought out and I know it will be an excellent article, especially since you have dual viewpoints.
Having said that, I saw something else in here that I think would be a great topic for you, and that is something related to ‘pushing the envelope…but not pushing it too far.’ : ) I’m not being sarcastic, I’m serious. You did, in fact ‘push’ it with your offer, however it wasn’t offensive, it was subtle and friendly and extremely CLEVER. Personally speaking, I’m very timid in a lot of ways and sometimes wish I had the ability to ‘push the envelope’ a little more. Just think about it…because you quite obviously know how to push it without coming across as tacky or offensive. That’s SUCH an admirable quality, especially for someone who’s a big chicken, like me! ; )
Lorraine Reguly says
Lynn, I’m unsure of what, exactly, you are trying to tell me.
I appreciate the compliment, though, about “not being tacky.” 😉
I try to be as helpful as I can, in general, too.
Please explain what you meant. Thank you.
Lynn Silva says
Hi Lorraine,
Just from the little bit I observed from you in this thread, you come across as a confident, go-getter with a lot of energy and tact. I’m SHY, and to put myself out there (even here) is difficult sometimes. I’ve been around for almost a year now so it’s gotten better. I know there are other bloggers who could really use some help on HOW to put themselves out there…be confident. Your energy, just in this post drew me to you. That’s what I’d LOVE to learn from you…HOW DO YOU DO THAT??? When I try to be more verbal, or put myself out there, I do it in a tacky way and end up making a donkey of myself. I either look like an idiot, or make it look like I’m being arrogant. I’m struggling trying to find a balance between putting myself out there and being shy. Your pitch and your conversation here make it look like you ‘ooze’ with confidence, I truly meant it as a sincere compliment even if it did come out…as usual… completely different.
Lorraine Reguly says
Lynn,
Okay, I understand what you mean now. Thanks. 🙂
I’m not going to get into specifics here about how you can “ooze confidence” too, as I’m actually writing a guest post for Dear Blogger on how bloggers (and anyone else, really) can “put themselves out there” on the web. If you want me to send you a link to that post when it’s published, I can. Of course, you could always follow my Tweets on Twitter, as I do a lot of Tweeting for Greg (the guy who runs Dear Blogger). Then again, you could also follow his blog, too! 😉
However, I’d be happy to send you a link through your contact page.
Alicia Rades says
I really like this idea. I can’t think of a post on BAFB that’s already covered this topic. (Someone correct me if I’m wrong!) It’s a wonderful topic that I wish I would have come up with first!
Lorraine Reguly says
Thanks for your kind words, Alicia. I appreciate them. 🙂
Sophie Lizard says
Nice choice of topic, Lorraine — I’d like to see examples of the types of tip you’ll give in the first 3 sections. Can you briefly tell us one or two example tips per section? 🙂
Lorraine Reguly says
Sophie, I will provide a few examples here, since you asked. 🙂
Subheads:
1. What Ticks Editors Off
Editors love people who have original ideas. It goes without saying (but I’m saying it anyway) that they also like people who write well. However, some of the best ideas are borne from intelligent thinkers… whose grammar might not be “up to snuff.” They dislike boring, old content, even if it has a somewhat newer perspective, and don’t like writers with a poor attitude. Because time is such a precious commodity (nowadays more than ever!), editors don’t have time for coddling, and are often blunt, to the point where a writer might take offense. What ticks editors off the most is a writer who cannot handle constructive criticism. The popular saying that “writers need to develop a thick skin” is popular for a reason, and freelancers are no exception.
2. Making a Good Impression With Your Writing: How to Do It
Short steps that you can take to ensure you make a good impression on your editor include:
• ensuring that you have not missued common homonyms, (ex. Was “they’re” instead of “there” or “their”?)
• making sure your writing has a readability score of at least 75%
3. How You Can Edit Your Own Work
– A list of things you can do (yes, more subheads here!) to edit your own writing, easily will involve me providing an excerpt from a post I wrote on this subject (called How to Help Readers “Get” Your Blog Posts, found at http://madlemmings.com/2013/11/04/help-readers-understand-blog-posts/) as well as a couple of other strategies that can be used. 🙂
I’m hesitant to reveal too much information here in the comments. That’s why I want to write the post! 😉
I hope this helps you make a decision on the winner!
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks Lynn. You are right, this community is perfect for newbies like myself to grow. I’m glad to be a part of it.
Yes, the idea of pitching does scare me. But I’m going to do it any way. After all, I’ve got nothing to lose, do I? 🙂
By the way, I must say that I see some great pitches here and many helpful comments. I’m learning a lot from these, thanks Sophie.
Issa Mirandilla says
All right, I’ll give this one a shot! 😀
Original Title: How to Keep Depression From Destroying Your Freelance Blogging Career
Alternative Titles:
(1) Are You a Freelance Blogger with Depression? Here’s How To Cope
(2) Is Depression Keeping Your Freelance Blogging Career Down? Here’s How To Bounce Back Up
You have blogger’s block.
Not just any blogger’s block, though. It’s the kind that feels like the Himalayas itself is standing between you and your freelance blogging success.
In short, you have depression.
Depression is a burden for anyone who has it, and freelance bloggers are no exception.
But here’s the good news: It doesn’t have to be that way.
*Have a (Guilt-Free) Break
– It’s tempting to push yourself beyond your healthy limits out of guilt (“But I need the money now!”) (“I might lose my client!”). Actually, it’s better in the long-run for everyone involved if you take some time off temporarily, and here’s why (and how).
*Do The Easy Stuff First
– If you’re not in the mood to write a full-blown blog post, do these things that still help your blogging process instead. (I’ll probably cite this post by Len Markidan on Write to Done, if that’s okay: http://writetodone.com/motivation-to-write-2/)
*Work Enough, Charge Enough
– Speaking of “not in the mood to blog”, that’ll probably be your default state 90 percent of the time. Here’s how to work your schedule (and rates) around that.
*Be Pickier About Clients Than Everyone Else
– When you’re depressed, the last thing you want is a difficult/demanding client. Here’s how to spot those kinds of clients a mile away, so you can save yourself a lot of grief.
*Get Help
– What if you can’t bring yourself to do any freelance-blogging related task whatsoever? Hint: No one said freelance blogging has to be a lone venture.
*Blog About Things You Like (In a Safe Space)
– Don’t feel like blogging for work? Try blogging for pleasure on sites like Tumblr and Medium, and you might just re-ignite your passion.
I’m Issa Mirandilla, a blogger for hire. I want to write this post, because (1) I’ve personally experienced work-crippling depression; (2) don’t see too many posts tackling depression in relation to freelance bloggers; and (3) want to help other freelance bloggers who’ve had similar experiences.
Lynn Silva says
Hi Issa,
This is a freelance blogging community and that phrase, ‘Bloggers’ Block’ is catchy. I’d LOVE to see this phrase in the title.
It grabs my attention far more than the word ‘depression’ because that word is, well, to me, it’s over used and too common. You have some awesome insight on this topic so draw the reader in with as ‘catchy’ a title as you can. : ) Great job, great insight, and I’d love to read this when it’s complete.
Alicia Rades says
Wow, fantastic pitch. I love the topic.
I particularly like this: “It’s the kind that feels like the Himalayas itself is standing between you and your freelance blogging success.” That’s the kind of emotional introduction Sophie likes!
My only suggestion is this: Make “Get Help” your last subheading. I think it would make more of an impact to structure it that way. Then you can go out with more of a bang by offering resources for getting help.
I also like Lynn’s suggestion.
Nice job!
Katherine Swarts says
I agree: “Blogger’s Block” is much catchier as a headline focus. That said, I love the topic idea and would suggest keeping it emphasized by still working some reference to depression into the headline.
Malithi Weerakkody says
Hi Issa, Love this pitch. Especially the phrase “Bloggers Block”. I agree with Lynn and Katherine, that would make a catchy headline.
I am looking forward to read this post, I must say. 🙂
Issa Mirandilla says
Thank you for the feedback, guys! 😀 To be honest, I was a bit worried about pitching this one, since “depression” is a sensitive and complicated topic, and “blogger’s block” is, well, only slightly different from “writer’s block”. But if this pushes through, I’ll definitely give my all for a polished final product. 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Yes, Issa! Yes! Love this topic. Love this pitch. Very, very well done. 🙂
Sophie Lizard says
I like this a lot. One quibble: depression and writer’s (or blogger’s) block aren’t necessarily related, so I’d like to see you focus firmly on one or the other. When I suffered from severe depression, I wasn’t worried about writer’s block — I was worried because I couldn’t even get out of bed and my deadlines were passing by while I languished in helpless misery, unable to meet them. Can you help people who’ve experienced similar feelings get their mojo back? Or would you prefer to focus more on how *any* writer can defeat writer’s block?
Issa Mirandilla says
Hi Sophie,
Thanks for the question! 😀 Yes, I intended this for freelance bloggers who lost their mojo a result of depression.
BetsyM says
I’d also be careful about how you use the word depression. From the headline, I thought this was a post about how to still be a successful freelance blogger if you suffer from diagnosed depression — and to be honest I thought it was a great topic because I don’t think mental health is talked about enough.
Adrienne says
Hi everyone, My name is Adrienne and I just want to introduce myself. I learning so much from all of your pitches, this is a great community. I will be pitching soon….But I wanted to send everyone one a cyber high five and good luck!
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Welcome, Adrienne! 🙂
Adrienne says
Thank you Lauren
Mark W. Kuglin says
I am new at this so please bear with me. I am using this as a training exercise. This is my first attempt in a formal structured blog.
Here is my pitch:
Headline: Blow Up Your Alarm Clock and Control Your Destiny: Become a Freelance Blogger
If you are like me an alarm clock is the bane of your existence. Being jarred out of a sound sleep does not put me in a good mood. The last thing I want to do is to stumble off to work.
Regardless of what time I go to bed it takes a few hours for the fog to lift.
**Subheads:
**Personality Types: Introvert to Extrovert
This section will discuss the range of personality types and its affects on behavior and choices.
**Have I Made the Right Career Choice For My Personality Type?
Many studies have been made on perfect jobs for these different types. This will highlight the strengths and weaknesses of both groups.
**How Do I Manage My Time?
Time management skills vary between the two extremes. The focus here will be on these skills and how they affect work efficiency and productivity.
**Does My Creativity Flow or Do I Have to Force It?
This section will look at the differences in creative styles of the two groups. Additionally, I will cover the places where the members of these groups will most likely find creative inspiration.
**Conclusion
A condensed version of what has been already covered coupled with persuavive language detailing who is a good fit for freelance writing.
**Bio: Several years ago I discovered a passion for writing. I wish to make it the final phase of my working career. I believe I have the raw materials of a good writer but I need the expertise of my peers to make this a reality.
NOTE! I am open to any constructive criticism and respect truly honest opinions.
Alicia Rades says
I like all your ideas in this pitch, but I feel there are too many ideas and the article would be all over the place. Could you maybe focus in on one theme? Maybe you could stick with the personality types subjects and discuss how each type can make freelance blogging work for them. Just a suggestion…
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
^ What Alicia said, Mark. You’ve got a nice article going (maybe), but it’s a bit jumbled and it’s not entirely clear how each section applies to freelance blogging, our niche.
Sophie Lizard says
A good first effort, Mark.
Your rationale and argument could be clearer. For example, you start with alarm clocks and waking hours, but then move on to introvert and extrovert personalities without clarifying the relationship between those two spectra.
Your headline and subheads are strong, by the way. 🙂 Nicely done. “Blow Up Your Alarm Clock and Control Your Destiny” is a good title for a post on any productivity-related blog… but then you have to make sure that’s the topic you discuss in the body of the post!
Pinar Tarhan says
Hi everyone, congrats on your pitches! I’m working on mine and hope to post it today.
Malithi, welcome, and best of luck!:)
Burlingtina, I actually like the SMART angle. Now, I was a Business major, so I had to suffer through project management classes. I say suffer through, because our lecturer went out of her way to make the lessons excruciating and boring. If you can spice up the language a bit, I’d love to read such a post. 🙂
I did love the pitches! 🙂
May inspiration be with us…
Burlingtina Vines says
Hi Pinar,
Thanks for your comments. I understand what you mean about those classes. You’re right, I do need to spice it up a little bit and make it conversational. Look forward to version two coming up. Good luck with your pitch!
Burlingtina
Pinar Tarhan says
Thanks! Looking forward to version two:)
Malithi Weerakkody says
Thanks for the welcome Pinar. Best of luck to you as well!
Chinelo Oputa says
Hi everyone.
I’ve been eagerly waiting for feedback on my pichfest entry but none has come yet. Please I really want to know how bad my pitch is. That’s one of the reasons I entered the competition. Do me this favour, BAFB community.
Thanks to you all, and best of luck to all contestants.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Sometimes it takes a while to get replies, Chinelo. But we always do!
Razwana says
Loving reading the pitches and feedback here, Lauren! Time to throw my hat into the proverbial ring! Here’s my pitch:
Headline:
How to be seen as an authority by your clients: 5 simple steps
Intro:
‘Nobody said it was easy… no one ever said it would be this hard’
Timeless philosophy from Coldplay, that happens to also apply to your freelance blogging career.
Building authority in your writing niche takes work. It isn’t a case of overnight success, but there are proven ways you can achieve this without having any qualifications in your chosen niche.
Subheads:
1. Be visible
– Be present on the sites your client will visit (including blogs, authority sites, social media). Interact with them and build relationships.
2. Give yourself a story
– Just like building a brand, know which parts of your ‘story’ are relevant to your clients.
– Be selective about the details you choose – and be honest !
3. Rave about your education
– If you don’t have formal qualifications to back up your knowledge, how did you learn? Books, other authorities, working with similar clients in the same niche?
– Share books, journals, and other sources when writing the blog article for your client.
4. Stand shoulder-to-shoulder with experts
– Every niche is littered with experts. Befriend them, write for them and add value to their communities.
– What governing bodies, associations or groups are related to your niche? Join those – adds instant credibility.
5. Build trust
– Even when you’re not pitching to clients, add value by sharing articles, news and info that’s relevant to them.
– Be professional at all times – stick to deadlines, pro-actively manage the writing project. No expert in the world can maintain their authority status by being difficult to work with.
Why me:
As a copywriter, my expertise not only lies with finding the right words for my clients, but also the right words that best represent them and their brand. I also teach people how to build credibility online in 6 weeks.
Alicia Rades says
Nice. I like this topic!
Malithi Weerakkody says
Good one Razwana. I’m going to try some tactics right away. And can’t wait to read the whole post. Keep it up! 🙂
Razwana says
That’s really great news – let me know how you get on !
Malithi Weerakkody says
Sure 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Looks good, Razwana. But I say that partly because I’m familiar with your work (seeing as you’ve written for us a couple times before!).
If you were a writer I’d never dealt with before; however, I’d ask you to tailor your pitch to be more specifically toward freelance blogging. You see, if I didn’t already know you — and know that you totally “get” BAFB and our niche focus — your pitch would be a bit too “general.”
Razwana says
Thank you for this, Lauren. I’ll definitely write the post to be specific to freelance bloggers (I planned on interviewing some for the piece to get their specific experience)
Sophie Lizard says
Coldplay. *shudder*
Stepping over my personal dislike of the dreary music, I like the title of your proposed post. 🙂
I feel some of the sections sound a bit heard-it-before, for example “be visible” and “be professional” — but if you can make the how clear and easy to execute, this will be welcome advice for newbies.
The section that interests me most is the one about building your story. Most of my mentoring students don’t have a handle on their brand, their backstory or their value proposition yet, so this is much more useful info (especially if it’s written specifically for freelance bloggers).
Razwana says
I’m not a fan of Coldplay either (post first album) but I love the line from this song. Everything else about it is terrible !
Alicia Rades says
Headline: How to Become a Karner Blue Butterfly in Your Freelance Blogging Client’s Eyes
Intro: There’s nothing quite like hearing you’re one-of-a-kind from freelance blogging clients.
The words, “You’re our go-to gal/guy” will send a giddy shiver throughout your body.
But few freelance bloggers will hear that in their career. High-quality bloggers are an endangered species.
(Blurb about my encounter with a Karner Blue butterfly and how it relates to client interactions.)
Outline:
1. Go Above and Beyond: Talk about ways you can exceed your client’s expectations. Mention that you don’t have to do these “extras” for free, but they’re rather already part of the price you quote.
2. Incorporate Feedback: Talk about how clients are impressed with bloggers who take feedback to heart instead of doing what they think is “best.”
3. Show You’re Willing to Learn: Talk about how this is a valuable asset and how you can do this.
4. Be Timely: Talk about how submitting work ahead of time and responding to feedback in a timely manner makes you more valuable in the eyes of a client.
5. Stay in Touch: Clients are more impressed with bloggers who are personable and ask questions (at least in my experience).
I’m Alicia Rades, a freelance blogger, writer, and editor who has been in the business for almost four years. Each piece of advice I chose to give in this article is something clients have said about me in the past (and I have the LinkedIn recommendations to prove it!). I’d like to use my experiences to show how other freelance bloggers can become extremely valuable—or “endangered”—to clients.
Alicia Rades says
I hope this all makes sense! The rest of my intro (which I didn’t put in my pitch) explains the connection between the endangered butterfly and the client better.
Malithi Weerakkody says
Hi Alicia. Great idea, I must say. Can I offer a suggestion? What do you think about starting your intro with some thing like this?
“What does a Carner Blue Butterfly and a high quality blogger have in common? Both of them are becoming extinct, and at an alarming rate too”
Malithi Weerakkody says
*something* 🙂
Alicia Rades says
Nice suggestion. Thank you!
Malithi Weerakkody says
🙂
Alicia Rades says
I also would appreciate any feedback.
Do you think it should be “Client’s Eyes,” singular, or “Clients’ Eyes,” plural?
Sabita Saleem says
Hi Alicia,
If I may say something, I believe plural makes more sense. After all who wants to stick with a single client !
Alicia Rades says
I just realized that I didn’t mean to imply that I’m one of the “rare” high-quality bloggers. I only meant this piece to talk about how to wow your clients the way the endangered Karner Blue butterfly wowed me.
I wish I could give more of the intro so the connection would make more sense…
Anyway, I welcome any feedback. Feel free to rip my pitch apart.
I was also wondering what people thought of the headline. I think it’s kind of a mouth full.
Alternative Titles:
How to Become a Karner Blue Butterfly in Your Clients’ Eyes
How to Become a Karner Blue Butterfly in the Eyes of Your Freelance Blogging Clients
Malithi Weerakkody says
If I may add another thing, I think Lynn and Katherine are right. Karner Blue Butterfly analogy is great, but I’m not sure if it should go into the title.
I am a biology graduate myself and I remember learning about Karner Blues while in uni. But the fact that they are an endangered species didn’t come to my mind when I first read your title.
My feeling is that a more general title will be more attention-grabbing.
Lynn Silva says
Hi Alicia,
First of all, I’d put clientS, because all freelance bloggers strive for more than just one client.
Everything in your pitch makes sense, so now, I’m just hoping what I say makes sense to you. ; )
Among the many things I’m ignorant about, one is the Karner Blue butterfly. Because of this, the title doesn’t grab my attention.
I know your writing, and you always provide stellar content. I’d read this article regardless of the title because you wrote it…but for anyone who doesn’t know you, my concern is that the title might not grab their attention.
I’m not sure if everyone is even familiar with this former boxer, because he was popular a looooong time ago, but there’s a saying by Muhammad Ali that says, “Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee.” I wonder if you’d consider doing a play on words with this saying and incorporate it into the title? Example: ‘How to blog like a butterfly and market like a bee to your clients.’ You could still use your story about how the Karner Blue butterfly being endangered relates to clients and even use the ‘market like a bee’ thing as an example of the extras you provide such as ‘marketing buzz’ etc.
It may be that Muhammad Ali isn’t known to others either, or that most people are familiar with the Karner Blue Butterfly. If so, just ignore my post. Either way, I have no doubt that you’d provide amazing tips for client relations. It deserves a title that draws everyone in. So please, let me know when you complete it. I’d love to have it for reference when dealing with clients. : )
Katherine Swarts says
My two cents on the title: since this isn’t a nature-and-conservation-focused blog, using “Karner Blue” in the title is more likely to inspire head-scratching than grab favorable attention. (I follow a fair amount of conservation news myself, and the last time I remember seeing the KB featured prominently was in the 1970s!) It’s not a good idea to make your editor, let alone the end reader, drop everything and run to the dictionary–even if dictionaries these days are in the next window of your computer.
Mark W. Kuglin says
I would like to offer a suggestion. If you are going to use the Karner blue butterfly in your title, I think it needs to be addressed in the opening few lines of your intro.
My first thought was what does a butterfly have to do with blogging? If it hadn’t of been for this contest I may not have read any further.
I think the butterfly is a clever idea but perhaps it’s too narrow of a hook to gain a large audience…
Ps. I struggle with what I call “the baby” effect sometimes. I tend to think all of my ideas are very creative or that the hook will be understood by all. The effect happens when I am too overly attached to an idea. I need to remember that some clever ideas are only going to be attention grabbers for a small niche of the larger overall audience. Sometimes ideas need to be scrapped or set aside for use elsewhere
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Excellent pitch, Alicia. 🙂
Also, for the curious: Google “Karner Blue Butterfly.” It’s beautiful! :O
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Also, I’d go with * clients’ eyes * as you want to be the Karner Blue Butterfly in all of your clients’ eyes, not just one client’s eyes. Right? 😉
Alicia Rades says
Revised Headline: How to Become an Endangered Species in Your Clients’ Eyes
Or something along those lines.
What do you think? Is that more catchy?
Thank you everyone for the feedback! Headlines are where I have the most trouble.
Malithi Weerakkody says
Hi Alicia, can I say something?
I’m not sure if “endangered” is the correct term here. Endangered is mostly used (in a biological sense of meaning) to mean “vulnerable” or “at risk”. When I read your pitch, I feel what you try to bring out is something like “one-of-a-kind” or “unique”.
Lynn Silva says
I like it Alicia. Writers who go above and beyond really are ‘endangered species’ to clients. I can’t wait to read the finished product. And P.S. I DID google KB and completely understand the analogy. Awesome idea. Why can’t I think of these things? ; )
BetsyM says
My advice is to keep working on the headline. I get where you’re going with it, but you don’t want to be an endangered species — that comes off as negative and something you WOULDN’T want to be.
What about incorporating an adjective or two for Karner Blue Butterfly? Even some of the words described here? Beautiful, Rare, Unique, One-of-a-Kind?
Sophie Lizard says
Blue butterflies are my favourite. 🙂 But I agree, the title needs to reference rarity and desirability rather than mention the species by name.
What would be totally impressive here is if you could make each subhead somehow butterfly-related. It’s tough going sometimes to “theme” your whole post that way, and you don’t want it to seem too forced, but think about ways you can mention wings, antennae, chrysalides, flight, metamorphosis, and so on in your subheads.
Alison Mansfield says
Headline: Money is great. Love is better.
Alt: All Boats Will Rise.
You and I are probably pretty similar. We get up in the morning, shrug ourselves out of our dreams, do some basic self-collection.
Then? It’s likely what we do next is about somebody else. We make breakfast; we eat breakfast. Somebody cooks it, sometimes it’s you. You call your girlfriend. You check your texts and see your mom’s complete recap of X Factor and her awful sister’s latest ruckus. Your kids need cereal, your son needs a ride to school. Your best friend is freaking out that her ex changed his relationship status on Facebook. Every one of your responses is driven by one thing.
You got it.
What really drives us is much more interesting and much more rewarding than cash. Money is great; but that’s not what gets us up in the morning. Money? Is just a medium in the commerce of love.
Bullets:
Prosperity is more fun. ( Money is just an idea. Prosperity comes from connecting)
How Can I Help You? ( Serve others and never starve)
Prosperity means all boats rise.
As Sophie Lizard says: “ Post what helps.” 😉
I’m Alison Mansfield, the weird kid. I write about the woo-woo, purpose, karma, love, money, and the art of commerce. I try to stick with the truest things I know. I’m pitching this post because I think the race for fast cash is a key component in any race to the bottom. We all deserve something better.
Sophie Lizard says
I like the overall idea of seeking prosperity as opposed to mere money, but I’m concerned that the headline and intro don’t give the reader much of an idea what’s to come — if it feels like a chit-chat about life in general, half your audience will drop out before they get to the good stuff.
Can you get right into the prosperity issue from the start? Maybe by talking about how it feels to chase money and why that’s different to the pursuit of prosperity.
Alison Mansfield says
Hm, aaaaaactually the problem might be there are potentially two ideas fighting for air here. I had a bunch of bullets floating around a central idea. Here’s a revision:
Prosperity is More Fun.
It’s great news that with some effort anyone with a computer can make money blogging. But if your only goal is to get to the next check, eventually the pursuit of cash for your blogs could leave you breathless, bored and broke. Making money is great, but a better goal is to build prosperity for yourself, and for your clients.
Prosperity comes from establishing a connection to a person you can help. It comes from assessing problems and being the one who can solve them so your clients can go on to solve problems for their clients.
Earning money puts food on your table, but you can only eat it once. Consider a Prosperity Model instead.
1. How Can I Help You?
During the Great Depression, great motivational minds all agreed on one point: If you can find a problem to solve, an answer to an issue or a clearly-needed service; you would never be without a job.
2. In a Prosperity Model, All Boats Rise.
Your service alleviates a problem that was stopping your client from providing his service. Both of you profit, both boats rise.
3. We are in this together.
When you focus on your service to others and ask how you can help them, you are no longer in the mere position of trying to pry money from their pockets. You are part of the great tapestry of commerce that puts food on many tables, not just your own.
4. ABS: Always Be Solving.
As Sophie Lizard says….post what helps 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Interesting take on this, Alison… So long as you keep the focus on how all this relates to freelance blogging and don’t wander too far off topic, it could be really good. 🙂
Alison Mansfield says
Thanks for comments Lauren and Sophie!
Laura Yeager says
Thanks for the encouragement, Lynn and Alicia.
Pinar Tarhan says
Hi everyone, this is my pitch:
Headline: Jealous of Other Bloggers’ Raving Communities? The Ultimate Guide to Creating Yours
Intro: You are a hard-working freelance blogger, but something’s missing: your posts aren’t reaching the level of engagement you hoped. Don’t worry; it’s not just you. Creating a raving community is damn hard, but it’s doable. You just need to take the necessary steps and accept that it’ll not happen overnight.
(a short description of a “raving community” goes here.)
Outline:
1) Write killer blog posts for your own blog: Write like you’re writing for your favorite editor/writer/blogger, but with your target audience in mind.
(I’ll feature a few essential pointers about what makes a great post, with a link or two a relevant Be a Freelance Blogger post, such as How to Write Epic Shit for Your Clients: A Gonzo Blogging Guide – which can easily be applied to writing your own epic posts.)
2) Be a kick-ass social media user: Don’t just use it half-heartedly; know what you are doing.
(I’ll feature a few essential pointers on being a social media superstar, including the importance of showing who you are with your headshot, thoughtfully filled in profile, catchy messages, emulating the tried-and-tested methods of bloggers in your niche and more. I’ll also add my own experiences like what kind of social media users I absolutely follow, and what kinds I ignore for all eternity (and why).
3) Guest post for well-targeted blogs: Whose audience would you like the attention of? Whose readers would you like to borrow?
(I’ll feature several essential pointers on guest posting, with the emphasis on identifying the best blogs for you to pitch (e.g. there’s no point in writing for a giant tech blog if your own blog has nothing relevant to offer.)
4) Don’t neglect the power of offline networking.
(I’ll remind readers that bloggers with loyal audiences don’t just hang out online. They go to networking events, meet each other for coffee or lunch, they have their elevator pitches ready for people who ask what they do…Sophie and Lauren collaborating, and how they first started would make a great example here.)
5) Apply what you have learned. Constantly!
(I’ll remind readers that growing a caring community will take a lot of precious time and effort. )
*
I’ve been a freelance blogger for over four years, and through trial and error, I have learned a lot about why community matters, and what to do to create mine. I’m a big believer in practicing what you preach, and I strive every day to apply all the tips I outlined above.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Looks good, Pinar. 🙂
Pinar Tarhan says
Thanks, Lauren:)
Sophie Lizard says
Nice idea, Pinar.
I’m not sure I’d use the words “raving community” — partly because (to me) a raving community would involve people taking Ecstasy, painting themselves luminescent and dancing to 4/4 beats until they puke. 😉 But I’m sure you can think of other ways to describe that loyal, helpful collection of people who back you up online.
Pinar Tarhan says
Hi Sophie,
I’m glad you liked it. I wanted a strong, fun word but might have gone overboard 😀 I’ll be thinking more along the lines of Zealous or passionate. 🙂
Katherine Swarts says
Okay, now that I’ve commented on two other query drafts, it’s time to lay my own head on the chopping block:
HEADLINE: How Many Times Do They Have to Tell Us …
INTRO:
“How many times do I have to tell you…” The opening kids hate to hear from parents. And words that many a publisher or mentor would like to say to the general population of aspiring bloggers.
It’s not as if the experts don’t warn us—again and again—against inadvisable approaches. Still, it often seems that nobody listens.
SUBHEAD #1: Read the Guidelines
The only thing worse than the would-be guest poster who submits something totally inappropriate in ignorance, is the one who starts a query with “I know this isn’t normally the sort of thing you publish, but mine is SO good …” Guest blogging is not a gambling game, and guidelines mean exactly what they say.
SUBHEAD #2: Read the Blog!
And, no, reading JUST the guidelines isn’t enough. Read at least 30 or 40 posts to make sure you “get” their voice, sense of humor, and general focus.
SUBHEAD #3: Enter with Confidence
Do not–repeat, NOT–start a query with “I’ve never been published anywhere/had my own blog/used social media before, but …” They want to know what you HAVE done and CAN do.
SUBHEAD #4: Rewrite, Edit, Proofread!
Professional blog editors are not there to take your first draft and spend an hour making it worth reading. Give them the best-polished work you can produce–and make it typo-free!
SUBHEAD #5: Stay Away from Content Mills
Despite having been denounced by every successful writer since the Internet became a source of pleasure reading, sites that pay $10 each for piles of (shoddily edited) articles still have a lot of amateurs convinced that this is the quick route to profitable full-time blogging. Don’t believe it; all you’ll get is third-rate projects that hone no skills and impress no high-paying markets.
SUBHEAD #6: Don’t Be Paranoid
Now that many people consider everything online to be public-domain, the fear that “they’ll steal my idea” is more justifiable than in print-only days. Still, reputable blog publishers, like all publishers, want long-term relationships with good writers; they have no reason to alienate you, but YOU may alienate THEM if you refuse to show them more than two words before the assignment.
BIO: I’m a longtime article, and now web-content, writer with dozens of how-to-write articles to my credit. (Not to mention articles on mental health, self-help, how-to, and personal inspiration–and I’ve even been paid for poetry!) Thanks to BAFB for the new leads you’ve already given me since I signed up last month.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Katherine!
Looks good… When I read your first two subheads I was concerned your article would be too similar to this one — http://beafreelanceblogger.com/guest-post-rejection — but you brought be back with the rest of your pitch.
Also, I like #3. I wrote something similar here: http://littlezotz.com/2013/09/q-is-for-querying/ (See #5 — great minds think alike!)
The one thing I’d really like to see — that I think would really help your article to stand out — would be having actual quotes from the “experts” who have given out this advice time and time again.
Katherine Swarts says
Oh, I plan to include quotes; I just didn’t see an obvious space to put them, or even the names of specific experts, in the headline-intro-subheads-bio format. (Interesting that no one so far seems to be planning on using a quote as an article opener.) I always think of Carol Tice when the content-mill subject comes up; most of the other items on the list I’ve heard at least five or six times each (I was a contributing editor to CHILDREN’S WRITER for 10 years and on practically every article, one or another expert source would bring up the “follow the guidelines” issue), hence the “how many times” angle.
I do have a few other quote sources in mind–Jon Morrow, Danny Iny, Peter Bowerman, Hope Clark of FundsForWriters–some of which I already have direct contact information for.
Sophie Lizard says
I like this idea and the subheads are fine, but the title could be clearer and more powerful. Feel free to suggest alternative headlines if you have time — no problem if you don’t, your entry’s valid either way.
We’ll be emphasising quotes, facts and other supporting evidence in our next Pitchfest in October, so you’ll be ahead of the game there if you’re used to interviewing sources. 🙂
Katherine Swarts says
Thanks, Sophie. I do have a good bit of interviewing experience from working with trade journals and community newspapers for over a decade.
Here’s a couple of alternate headline ideas:
“Things All Writing Experts Tell Us But Too Few Bloggers Take Seriously.” (Perhaps too wordy? Afraid that applies to most alternate ideas I’ve experimented with so far.)
“It’s Common Sense to Take Common Advice.” (Doesn’t really get across the main idea, does it?)
Or, elaborating on the last point: “It’s Common Sense to Take Common Advice: What Bloggers Can Learn from Experienced Writers’ Pet Peeves.”
Wish I’d thought to set my mind to “sleep on this” mode the last couple of nights.
Neal Pritchett says
Winner or loser, I am looking forward to any critique, and to playing the game. A thousand word blog is not a problem for me. I had a hard time keeping my pitch from hitting a thousand words. My problem is keeping things short, and resisting the temptation to ramble (as can clearly be seen here). I fear my “pitch” started as basically a full article. The following is what was left after discarding two thirds of my original pitch – a startlingly painful process. Thanks for the chance and for all the great blogs, and for making writing fun again.
Here’s the windup, and the pitch………
Yourself – the most important client you will ever have.
Writing a proposal, query, or offer for services should be treated as an assignment for your first and most important client – yourself. This is the client that will provide you with most of your paying jobs. It’s easy to look clueless by treating this differently from any other writing assignment.
Clues from the clueless
Some recent proposals, accompanying bids on http://www.freelancer .com, are just plain bad. How did these people get out of high school? Five minutes on Freelancer yielded a number of flagrant errors which will be held up as examples in the article.
A sense of place from the placeless
Even with proper grammar, some writing proposals are just plain out of place. These people may write decently; but it appears they are confused, or perhaps unconcerned, about what the client wants. Examples will follow in the article.
A sense of identity from the anonymous
Then we have the generics. These people don’t really tell you anything, except that they want you to pay them to write. Their proposals are not definite enough to really tell a client anything about them. Examples of this approach will also be included.
Say it right the first time; then get a second opinion.
Editors don’t expect us to be perfect; but they expect us to care enough to produce perfect, or nearly perfect, copy. Yet we all make mistakes. An editor will go over a paid submission; when you write for yourself you will need to enlist a friend or someone you trust to act in the editor’s place.
Get it in writing and get it right.
If a writer is unable to create an engaging proposal for a potential client, how can a client expect the target audience to be engaged?
Who I am:
I am a reader that loves to write, and a writer that wants to get paid. I have been blogging and hosting a personal web site for years. I have made a lot of silly mistakes and hope to help others to avoid them.
Alicia Rades says
I really like your idea in the title, but I got really confused when it came to the subheadings. Are you going to be talking about how to set fair rates for yourself? In the title, it seemed like you were going to talk about how you can take care of yourself to effectively run your business. I think that would be a great topic.
I’m interested in hearing more about the main angle of your piece. What exactly will you be focusing on?
Neal Pritchett says
Hello:
This would be about taking yourself seriously as a client, when you write proposals, your web page, make bids, and otherwise promote yourself. Don’t look at it like self promotion. See it as a job for a client. I see too many people out there selling writing services, but doing so with poor writing, little effort, and almost no thought. These people have spelling and grammar errors, dull copy, irrelevant details or no details at all, and just look silly. They don’t apply their own hard learned skills for their own benefit. It’s like a personal trainer that’s overweight, or an auto mechanic whose car never runs right. The first thing you want to do is look at yourself as a client, and say “OK, I have this client who is a writer. Now I have to create the best copy, and most effective materials to promote my client’s interests.” In addition to helping you to take yourself seriously as a client, this dispassionate view may go a long way towards reducing some of the anxiety about promoting yourself. You know you can do this, or you would not set out to become a writer. So buckle down and get to work for you first and most important client – yourself.
Sophie Lizard says
I’ve given similar advice to students who are scared to make first contact with potential clients — imagine you’ve been hired to contact people on behalf of an excellent freelance writer you admire, who happens to have the same name and history as you. 😉
Nice idea. The pitch itself could be a bit clearer, but the idea is solid.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
^ Yeah… It took me a few read-throughs to “get” what you were talking about, Neal. But, Sophie’s right: Good topic — but try to make your pitch clearer next time. 😉
Richard Holmes says
Okay, here goes. I’ve written the opening few sentences for each sub-header, rather than giving a general description of what each will be about. Hope that’s okay? Each sub-header will then go on to offer a solution to the pitfalls I’ve outlined below.
HEADLINE: Want To Make It As a Blogger? Don’t Be Such A Human!
INTRO:
“Being a human being is a tough gig. Sure, it allows you the opportunity to enjoy a rich and fulfilling existence. But there’s a load of extra baggage that comes with it, too. Like emotions. As an aspiring blogger, emotions can hold you back if you let them get the better of you. The answer? Don’t be such a human.”
SUBHEADS:
1: Humans Hate Rejection
We’re sensitive souls, us humans. So when we’re told our proposal didn’t hit the right note, our idea lacked originality, or we’re too inexperienced, it hurts. Bad. When you start out as a blogger, this feeling can manifest itself into an extended period of self-analysis. Feeling sorry for yourself can quickly follow.
2: Humans Get Bored Easily.
As humans, we’re easily distracted. Our brains seeks out easy tasks that we can complete with little effort. It’s the path of least resistance. But ask yourself … is that hundredth e-book you’ve downloaded this week really going to help your career, or is it just an excuse to avoid writing for the next 30 minutes?
3: Humans Think Too Much.
It’s kind of hard to stop thinking. Zen Buddhists have been trying to perfect the art for centuries. The trouble is, when you’re trying to make it as a blogger, that internal monologue rattling around your head is often a critical one: “What if nobody likes my work?” “What if I never win a pitch?” Thoughts like these can seriously hold you back.
4: Humans Fear Being Judged.
Our species evolved as part of tightly-knit groups. Fitting in and being accepted was vital for our own evolutionary survival. Fast forward 100,000 years and we’re still obsessing about our social status. Only now, our group has grown a bit. It’s gone global, and there’s a whole world out there potentially waiting to judge our blogging. That kind of thinking can be paralysing.
5: Humans Don’t Like Change
We’d all like to think of ourselves as adventurous, open-minded, embracers of new opportunity. Change is great, right? The truth is, we’re also fond of the familiar. Change can be scary. Sticking with what you know is often the easy option. But change is all part of becoming a full-time blogger. You have to step out your comfort zone and learn a whole new set of skills.
BIO:
My name is Richard Holmes and I’ve been a copywriter for the past 9 years, but I’ve always wanted to blog about my passions in life – food and travel. I’ve just moved to Thailand from the UK and started my own travel blog, which has quickly become an obsession – firing me up to go on to blog on a full-time basis. But there’s a ton of insecurities holding me back that I’m certain other aspiring bloggers will relate to.
Neal Pritchett says
There is an old saying that a military commander who cares about his men is unable to command; but a military commander who does not care about his men is unfit to command. It’s the same with writing. Feelings, emotions, and sensitivity are huge burdens for anyone trying to develop the presumption to be a writer. Yet without this feeling part of you, your writing isn’t worth reading.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Richard!
Interesting take. I see potential here.
My one beef is that you point out how being human is “bad” for freelance bloggers, but none of your sections (except, perhaps, #5) share how said bloggers can “fix” their human nature to become better freelance bloggers.
Richard Holmes says
Hi Lauren, thanks for your feedback. In the full article, my plan is very much intended to offer a solution to these pitfalls of human nature. So each point will have a subsequent “fix” to improve as a blogger and overcome these commons problems. Obviously I can shorten the explanation for each problem if you think each sub header might be too long.
Sophie Lizard says
Nice idea. Not sure the title is 100% yet, but we can work on that. 🙂
Richard Holmes says
Thanks, Sophie. Definitely happy to re-work the title but glad you like the idea. 🙂
Shernette says
[Skeletal I know]
Pitch
1. Here a Blogger, there a blogger – How do I stand out?
a. Just get started – have confidence in yourself and begin expressing yourself as only you know how.
b. What Interests you. Think about it and write about it.
c. Be yourself – there will be persons who praise and there will be critiques. Accept it as a part of life. Don’t waver.
d. Keep researching where necessary and keep on writing and strengthening your style.
e. Guest blogging and its place in your blog.
BIO I am a new freelance writer who is trying to launch into writing fulltime.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Shernette!
To qualify as an entry in this contest, your pitch needs to have a Headline (title) and an introductory paragraph.
Shernette says
Pitch
1. Here a Blogger, there a blogger – How do I stand out?
a. Just get started – have confidence in yourself and begin expressing yourself as only you know how.
b. What Interests you. Think about it and write about it.
c. Be yourself – there will be persons who praise and there will be critiques. Accept it as a part of life. Don’t waver.
d. Keep researching where necessary and keep on writing and strengthening your style.
e. Guest blogging and its place in your blog.
BIO I am a new freelance writer who is trying to launch into writing fulltime.
Derek Thompson says
I really like your subheadings – they work well together and have a natural flow. For my two penn-orth, I wonder if the heading is really aligned to those subs? Maybe turn the header into a subheader that paints a picture of the landscape, and have a header along the lines of a heading along the lines of So You Want To Be A Blogger, Now What?
I hope this is helpful.
Kind regards,
Derek
Kristy says
Here we go. A run down of a few personal tricks I use to balance my blogging and my dreaded (insert groan) day job.
Title: Find More Blogging Time Between the 9-5
Rising to blogging stardom while holding down a day job means literally working around it (and maybe a little through it). These tips can help you balance both while avoiding burnout and breakdown.
Subhead 1: Embrace your Day Job or How to not TOTALLY Hate your Job
Sure we all dream about a steaming mug and pajama pants as our new morning commute but there are (believe it or not) aspects of employment you’ll probably miss.
Subhead 2: Find Time to Work, At Work
Ways to use your breaks, lunches and possibly work hours to advance your blogging career. Includes checking e-mails (so you don’t later when you’re supposed to be writing or pitching), reading (if you’re like me and thrilled that writers write about writing), brainstorming and using headphones to listen to podcasts and webinar replays that would normally eat into your writing time.
Subhead 3: Scheduling your Writer’s Block
No, not times when you’re uninspired (though if I could all of mine would come while I’m asleep). Instead I’ll show how to find specific blocks of time in your daily schedule exclusively for blogging endeavors.
Subhead 4: Mapping your Master Plans
Covers setting up a seperate calendar or planner for your blogging so you know what needs to be done next instead of floating when you do finally get to sit at your writing desk.
Subhead 5: Got Ten Minutes?
We’ve all gotten ready for work and had a little time to kill before it’s time to go. Use this time to set up your workspace for the next task in your planner.
Subhead 6: You’ve Gotta Be Freaking Kidding Me!
Things are going to go wrong. Period. Don’t twist up your knickers because of it. A reminder to be kind to ourselves (and others) when our perfectly planned, scheduled and sacred blog time is intruded upon.
A former freelancer, journalist and copywriter, I am now working to rebuild my writing career one query, pitch, blog post and link at a time.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Kristy!
I see potential here. I know that there are a lot of freelance bloggers who either can’t or don’t want to make freelance blogging their sole source of income — and so they stick with their 9-5 jobs and freelance on the side.
But “freelance” is the word I don’t really see come up in your pitch. I can see how your ideas would apply to blogging on the side while maintaining a day job, but are you also earning money from said blogging…? Maybe a section could be about balancing your “boss” and your “clients.” Something like that.
Sophie Lizard says
I agree – this is a good pitch, it only needs a bit of tweaking to align with the BAFB audience. 🙂
Kristy says
Thank you for the guidance…here’s how I used it:
The intro changes from “Rising to blogging stardom…” to:
Whether you plan to freelance full time in the future or want to keep guest blogging as a side hustle, holding down a day job means literally working around it (and maybe a little through it).
New Subhead: Use your Day Job to Make Money Blogging
Will introduce Alltop (recommended by Brian Dean in his article Blogger Outreach, which he guest posted on boostblogtraffic) as a way to locate possible paying gigs by searching for blogs related to your current and previous employment
Subhead 2: Find Time to Work, At Work
Also include using your time to immerse yourself in the blogs of potential clients you hope to pitch
Subhead 4: Mapping your Master Plan
Will highlight using your calendar for when assignments are due, the editorial calendars of repeat and possible clients and when queries were sent/when you should expect a reply
Subhead 6: You’ve Gotta Be Freaking Kidding Me!
Will be deleted, with the theme worked into the conclusion instead of used as an entire sub-section
Thanks for the feedback! I hope I used it accurately! If something still doesn’t work or I totally missed the mark let me know. I can take it 🙂
Kara Andersen says
I’m so excited to participate in Pitchfest this time around. Happy pitching, all!
***
Suggested Headline: Badass Blogging: How to Craft a Killer Sales Page for Your Website
If you’re new to the business of blogging, you may be familiar with a few “rules:”
A) You aren’t yet good enough to have kick-ass potential clients knocking on your door.
B) You’re not qualified or experienced enough to write exceptionally awesome blog posts.
C) You lack authority to tell your clients what they actually need.
D) Because A, B and C, there’s not much you can do right now with a sales page on your website.
First, D is downright false.
Regarding A, B and C…
So *what*?
As far as rules go, the ones that say you cannot possibly work with kick-ass clients, write awesome blog posts or craft an effective sales page *because* you are a beginning freelance blogger are made to be broken. Fight back by crafting a killer sales page for your website that will convince potential clients they absolutely cannot function without your services.
Welcome to the world of badass blogging, baby.
Subheading: How to Craft a Killer Sales Page
1. Clearly define your blogging services. Make it easy for readers to understand what you do and how that is valuable to them.
2. Use confident language–you’re not asking permission to write, you’re explaining what you *will* do to solve a problem for a client.
3. Highlight what makes you unique. Let them know why they should hire you for a project instead of another blogger.
(These are the main ideas of the first three tips I’d offer, though I’m planning six in total. 🙂 Each would be fleshed out into a short paragraph.)
Why should I write this? In working on the recent revamp of my own sales page I’ve studied tons of other writer’s pages and solicited feedback from trusted friends and colleagues to get an idea of what works. As a blogger who didn’t have a sales page on her website when she was new to the game, I understand how tough it is to write one when you’re a beginning blogger struggling to muster the confidence to effectively sell yourself.
Lorraine Reguly says
Kara, I have to say that I REALLY like the opening paragraphs of your pitch.
Because I liked them so much, I visited your site. Might I offer a few suggestions about your site and the website page you’ve revamped?
(Thanks. Here they are…)
1.Get your own hosted site.
2. Install a contact form. It’ll make clients take immediate action, rather than having to email you by copy-pasting-and-editing your email address. (A classic rookie mistake I made in my early days, too!)
3. Spell resumé correctly. Without the accent, you are simply saying “resume” (restart)!
I hope this helps you, and I wish you much success. 🙂
Katherine Swarts says
Actually, I think it should be “résumé,” with two accent marks.
Lorraine Reguly says
Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary (11th ed.) lists the spellings in this order: “résumé” or “resume,” also “resumé.” (The wording indicates that the first two are equal in popularity, and the third is somewhat less common.)
“Resumé” reflects not only the Canadian Oxford spelling but also the English pronunciation. Only the final “e” is pronounced with the “ay” sound of the French accent.
Kara Andersen says
Lorraine, thanks for your feedback. I know I’m better off hosting–all in good time!
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Kara!
Now that the argument about accent marks is finished, let’s talk about your pitch… ;P
I like this idea, but I’m iffy on some of the wording. It sounds more like you’re talking about having bloggers create a Writing (Blogging) Services page for their websites rather than a sales page.
Sales Page = http://beafreelanceblogger.com/client-hunting-masterclass/
Writing/Blogging Services Page = http://littlezotz.com/writing-services-offered/
See what I mean?
Or maybe you do mean they should have an actual sales page? If so, I’d love to hear more about how that would work. I’ve seen bloggers sell classes & programs via sales pages, but not their actual blogging services… That’s more a technique used by copywriters, at least in my experience.
But if you’re talking about a Services page, then I’m nodding in agreement: It’s a page all freelance bloggers should have on their websites, but so few actually do. It’s something that goes a long way toward blogging for money rather than simply blogging for fun. 🙂
Anyway, I’d love to get a little clarity on what you actually meant. Because I do see potential here, but I want to make sure we’re on the same page. Thanks!
Sophie Lizard says
If the page provides a way for visitors to *buy* your services, it’s officially a sales page. If it lists services and says “contact me for a quote” or something similarly low-commitment, it’s in a grey area with a whole bunch of names like conversion page, squeeze page or opt-in page. 😉
I think in your title you can say “sales page” or “sell your services”, but in the body of the post you’ll need to explain what kind of page you’re talking about. Either way, your advice seems solid. Nice pitch.
Kara Andersen says
Hi Sophie,
If I end up writing this blog post I’d add another subhead before “How to Craft a Killer Services Page” called “What is a Services Page?” to explain the difference between a sales page and a services page as you and Lauren have so expertly done here, and to clarify expectations for the rest of the post. 🙂
Thanks for your input!
Kara
Kara Andersen says
Hi Lauren,
I do mean blogging services page here. Thanks for the feedback!
Kara
Kat Loveland says
Blogging – It’s not just about typing anymore.
Vlogs, Podcasts, Youtube – How to multimedia your way to quality clients.
With the increasing ease and relative decrease in costs to make videos or podcasts there is no reason you shouldn’t take advantage of every platform possible. Cell phones allow you to shoot HD video, high quality software is now available for cheap or free and have become very intuitive and simple to use. Imagine a prospective client coming to your site and seeing that you can not only write well but can record, edit and post high quality, informative videos or podcasts, host Google Hangouts or record Skype interviews ,talk about instantly building your brand.
Subheadings.
1.How to upload and edit onYoutube, how to host a Google hangout and record a Skype chat.
2.Discussion about various editing software
3.Equipment needed
4.How to crossmarket your multimedia and blogging skills
5.The advantage of video or podcasts over the written word.
6.Examples of successful podcasts, vlogs and youtube channels.
The point of this article is to help people overcome their fear or lack of knowledge about multimedia and show how that it’s not only easy, it’s also fun, creative and can lead to increased awareness of their brand.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Kat
Sophie Lizard says
Kat, you read my mind. 🙂 I’ve had this broad topic on my to-write list for a while, so I’d be glad to have someone create a post about it for me!
You didn’t tell us about yourself — what multimedia experience do you have, and have you used it to earn extra money from your own blogging clients?
Kat Loveland says
I’ve made a few vids, recorded some Skype chats, posted those, edited vids for others. I actually am not a blogger so can’t say I’ve made money with it but I know that youtube, podcasts etc are becoming increasingly popular. I can show you how to do it. 🙂
Adrienne says
All right here is my pitch. This is a great contest I have really enjoyed the process of researching and writing up my idea. I am looking forward to the feedback.
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Headline 1
Break free of your no follow-through writing habits with 12 key strategies
Headline 2
Get Over Your No Follow-Through Habits and Freelance Blog Like a Pro [12 Foolproof Tips]
Intro:
You wake up with a sparkle in your eyes. Putting on your figurative bandana and black war paint you sit down to write. Staring at a blank page your head begins to clutter with ideas. Grabbing your head in frustration you say screw it, and decide to watch your favorite cat videos instead.
This is your brain on no follow-through!
Subheadings:
Daily Brain Dumps
Start each writing session by letting out all your thoughts without editing or grammar checks. I provide 3 tools you can use to clear mental clutter.
Give Yourself Dabble Time
Explore and engage without restraint. The goal is not about completing anything but just find ways to let your creative expression out.
Keep A Notebook Under Your Pillow
When you are sleeping your mind is processing the day and many times ideas bubble over. Capture those great ideas in your notebook they will give you direction for your next writing session.
Get Over The Sparkle Feeling And Get To Work
The fact is creating is little about that inspirational whistle while you work feeling, no pain, no gain. To see the benefits you have to push through and put in the work.
Stop Multitasking on The Internet
Having 10 different tabs open on your browser is sending you into 10 different directions, making it easy to get distracted and lose focus. Here are tools you can use to prevent this behavior.
Track Your Time
Awareness births change. Tracking your time keeps you accountable on how your spend your minutes, how many cat videos are you watching truly?
Bio + Reason Why I Want To Write This Post:
My name is Adrienne Bennett, I am a freelance writer who is passionate about the ways words can help people create, connect, and inspire overall growth. I am writing this post for every freelance blogger out there who struggles with creative overload. You want to produce consistent good work but you may lack a system to complete your projects.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Adrienne!
This is all good advice, but I’m concerned the focus will be solely on blogging (or general writing) and not talk enough (or at all) about the freelancing aspect of freelance blogging.
Will there be a section on “following-through” with replying to potential clients? Or pitching to blogs that pay?
Adrienne says
Hi Lauren,
Great feedback about my pitch. I just wanted to let you know I do cover in my other Sub headings, I have a total of 12. Here are the titles for each section
Sub headings:
Keep Pitching Stop Ditching
Persist Don’t Resist Your Client’s Interaction
I know your rules stated you can only pitch 6 Sub headings so I wanted to follow your rules. Thank you again for the feedback.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
No worries, Adrienne. 🙂 Thanks for clarifying that.
For the future: Since you can only include 6 subheaders, make sure they’re the best subheads — even if they’re not in the order you have them written down in your outline. You really want to make sure the editors know that you “get” their niche.
Adrienne says
I hear you loud and clear… Thanks : )
Laura Yeager says
Sophie: Thanks for your input. I’m changing the title yet again, to take some of the focus off “making a fortune.” The new title is
“Misfortune’s Silver Lining”
Jennifer Holman says
It’s my first pitchfest, but I’m super excited to join!
Headline: How to lose anxiety’s invitation to your freelance blogging party.
Alt. Title: Five ways to be a freelance blogger with anxiety
It always happens when you least expect it. You’re finishing up your blog post for the week when anxiety hits you like an unexpected itch. You feel all is lost, but wait! You can still blog with these helpful tips.
1. You can miss one: It’s alright to miss one post it won’t cause your blog to disappear. Here I’ll explain how one missed post won’t result in no new views.
2. Every little word counts: It may take many breaks, but you can finish that post. I’ll talk about how a couple of words every few hours will add up and then you’ll be done.
3. Reboot your mind: If your stalled blog frustrates you, step back, take a breath, and reboot by looking at your first posts. You may find a gem hidden in those old posts that you can make a new post about.
4. Let your blog do the work: Write a post when you’re having a good day or week and schedule it to post. That way you don’t have to rush to your office in order to finish it on time.
5. Time to scratch that itch and start again: It may be a hundred words or a long sentence, but any post is a good post. In time one post will become two and two will become three and you’ll be back on track.
Hi, my name is Jennifer Holman and I’m a new blogger. I have GAD (Generalized Anxiety Disorder) and I wanted to write an article about some the techniques I use that helps me. I hope that it can help other freelance bloggers with anxiety too.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Jennifer!
If you can find a way to work a freelancing aspect into this post (since it has to be focused on freelance blogging) then I’m all for it! 🙂
Perhaps you could tweak it to be about how to maintain a client’s blog whilst gripped by anxieties? Or how to continue to update your own blog when your anxiety “says” that all your brain can handle is one or the other (your client’s blog or your own)?
Sophie Lizard says
I agree — I’d love to read about how to maintain a successful freelance blogging career while you have an anxiety disorder, but this pitch comes across as focused on a personal blog. Can you give it the freelance perspective?
Jennifer Holman says
Thank you for the feedback! Yes, I can change it to include freelancing blogs. Sophie: Can I post the new one or is it too late?
Sophie Lizard says
Hi Jennifer, you submitted a complete pitch before the deadline so you can still make changes to it. 🙂 We’re announcing the winners on Saturday, though, so you’ll need to revise your pitch by the end of Friday 5th — that’s today!
Jennifer Holman says
Alright I revised it! I may need to pick a new title though.
It’s my first pitchfest, but I’m super excited to join!
Headline: You can be a freelance blogger with anxiety
It always happens when you least expect it. You’re finishing up an assignment for you client when anxiety hits you like an unexpected itch. You feel all is lost, but wait! You can still blog with these helpful tips.
1. Leave some encouraging sticky notes around: Sometimes anxiety makes it hard to remember that blogging is an important career, but some sticky notes on your desk will give you a nice reminder when your anxiety builds.
2. Spread it out: If you have more than one client, it’s easy for your mind to think you have to do everything at once. Remember, there are seven days in a week and you can spend each day working a little on your client’s assignments. You don’t have to do everything at once.
3. Every little word counts: Sometimes anxiety makes you feel bad if you don’t write at least half a page a day. Even if it’s one sentence it’s one more than you had before and you can build on it, until you finish your assignment.
4. Let your blog do the work: If you’re running a personal blog while on assignment, write a post earlier in the week and schedule it to post. That way you don’t have to rush to finish your stuff while working on your client’s post.
5. It’s okay to fail: Sometimes you’re not going to always make your deadline and that’s okay. Email your client a few days beforehand to let them know if you can’t make it. Remember that it’s only one small bump. There are more clients out there that will be more than happy to hire you.
Hi, my name is Jennifer Holman and I’m a new blogger. I have GAD (Generalized Anxiety Disorder) and I wanted to write an article about some the techniques I use that helps me. I hope that it can help other freelance bloggers with anxiety too.
Jennifer Holman says
Thank you! Yes, I can change it to include that. Thank you so much for the feedback!
lily says
Here’s my pitch:
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How a simple secret of successful speed dating can skyrocket your blog conversion, immediately
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My friend works for a relationship guru and once, she tells me about a simple experiment they are running to get more data for their upcoming course on speed dating. They run test on both male and female, and find out that by simply changing your outlook (posture and appearance), you can increase your chance of getting a second date up to 78%.
Sub-headlines:
1/ Psychology 101:
-We judge a book by its cover. Not that we are shallow, but we are born that way.
-It’s the snap decision that can make or break your love life, but it also applies to your blog visitor. And while your visitor can’t see the appearance of your blog, they will stop long enough to read your headline.
-Your visitor judge your article by its headline.
2/ Why successful bloggers spend more time writing their headline than the rest of their article:
-It’s the first thing your visitor will see: the headline is at the top the page
-People are busy. Nobody will bother to read your article if they can’t even get past your boring headline.
-Headline is your bait to not only reel readers in, but also to keep them staying till the end (of your article, of course!)
3/ Learn to write better headline:
-Your visitor will thank you for it, and your blog will too.
-A few books or links for getting started
-Write, rewrite, refine.
-Apply and spice up your article
4/ Some pointers for writing better headlines that you can use right away:
-Short, simple, to-the-point
-Inviting, emotional-aroused
-Try to include keywords for SEO purpose
-Make it fun and make sure you have fun writing it too
About me: I’m a new freelancers that love to cover the business, technology, and self-improvement fields. I have learned so much from reading articles from this blog, and it inspires me to start out on my own.
Angelina Smith says
One Sobbing Friend Later, She Learnt About Blogging From The Heart
Have you ever answered the phone only to find a sobbing friend thanking you for writing something so powerful that the government changed their decision, finally allowing her to reunite with her family for the first time in years?
The realisation dawns.
As writers we literally have the power to potentially change, save and improve lives around the world.
Subheadings
1) From Your Heart to Theirs- how writing from your heart connects you to your audience
2) Steal Their Heart- by winning your audiences heart, you can motivate and inspire them to do things
3) ‘Uh Oh’ Smeagol’s About- why bloggers don’t always write from the heart- overcoming the fear of nasty comments and rejection of your ideas and opinions
4) When Your Heart’s Not Open- how not blogging from your heart could be hampering your success as a blogger
5) Let Your Heart Speak- how to include more of yourself in your posts, whilst still helping your audience
6) There’s Writing From Your Heart And Then There’s ‘Writing From Your Heart’- how to not write from your heart
Take Away:
-Never doubt the power of your words
-Every single post that we write, has the power to brighten someone else’s day and inspire them. Always write from your heart and allow your words to shine upon others
-This post will include a minimum of 3 examples (included into relevant sections of the post) of when writing from the heart has helped me touch the lives of others.
My Bio:
I’m Angelina Smith, a freelance writer, last year I packed my bags, ditched my job and brought a one way ticket to a remote part of the world and began to heal my life. Since then, I really began to write from my heart to heal my life and help others. The aim of this post is to inspire others to write from their heart, so that they can use their power as a writer reach the hearts of their audience.
Lorraine Reguly says
Congratulations on making such an awesome move. 🙂 I know there is a lot of validity to your point of writing from the heart, since I started my first blog by writing from my heart, and readers simply LOVED my honesty.
Nice to meet you, btw.
Angelina Smith says
Thanks Lorraine for your kind words. I think it’s so important to write from the heart always. Please continue to write from your heart and it’s lovely to meet you too.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Angelina!
This sounds like it would make a very sweet, very meaningful blog post — and I hope you write it. However, I’m not sure if it’s a good “fit” for BAFB… It tackles the power of blogging (or writing in general, at least), but I didn’t see any mention of freelancing (earning money with said blogging).
Angelina Smith says
Thanks Lauren for your advice and encouragement. I shall indeed write this post and I’ll re-pitch again to BAFB in the next pitchfest.
Angelina Smith says
Sorry, I was meant to write that the headline for this post is-
‘One Sobbing Friend Later, She Learnt About Blogging From The Heart’
Looking forward to hearing all your feedback soon.
Jessi Stanley says
Hi everyone!
I’ve been reading Sophie’s blog for a couple of years, and I’m finally ready to take the plunge and submit a pitch. Happy to be participating! 🙂
HEADLINE – Be the Boss of Your Ideas: A Pitching System for New Freelance Guest Bloggers with Wandering Minds
THE IDEA –
If you’re like me, you have GAZILLION ideas.
Having lots of ideas is a good thing. To be a successful freelance writer, however, it helps to have a system for pitching ideas. Otherwise, it’s hard to focus, and you can get stuck in the what-do-I-do-next phase.
This system has taken me to the working-writer phase.
(NOTE: Throughout the explanation of my system, I will use an extended example of how I’ve used the system.)
The System
1. Pick an idea you want to work on – Pick any idea you’re in the mood to spend a lot of time with. Don’t think markets. This post morphed from an idea about a pet peeve concerning coffee.
2. Find a way to pitch the idea pretty much “as is” – The original focus of your idea will be closest to your heart, so you definitely want to find a blog that will publish it nearly “as is.” I’ve pitched my original idea to a lifestyles blog that will totally get my pet peeve.
3. Come up with two to four other ways to pitch the idea – I’ve pitched the idea with a marketing focus for an entrepreneurs blog (the pitch focuses on what people include in their online profiles). I’m pitching the idea here as an example of how to get multiple pitches out of an idea. I’ve also pitched a woman’s blog about rituals I inherited from my family (the morning coffee ritual).
4. Send out your pitches – Find blogs that publish pieces similar to the ones you’re ready to write about and send them your idea.
5. Send out more pitches – There are conflicting opinions on this, but I’m with the group that believes it’s ok to send out simultaneous submissions. You’ve sent your pitches to your favorite blogs. Go ahead and send to your second and third choices, too. (Will explain worst-case scenario).
Not everyone needs a system like this, but I do. It just seems efficient to me. I figure while I’m in the world of a topic, I might as well get as many posts as possible out of it. Then I can move on to the next topic.
I’m Jessi Stanley, a freelance writer in Greenville, NC, USA (@stanleyjessica). I’ve been published on the blogs Make a Living Writing and Freelance Writers Academy. After two and a half years of learning about the online world and studying freelancing in general, I’ve finally reached the point where I’m pitching blogs and magazines on a regular basis.
Alicia Rades says
I really like this take on pitching. I particularly like tip #3 and would love to hear any other tips/secrets you have regarding the ideation process.
Jessi Stanley says
Alicia,
Thanks for your comment! Are you saying you think this post needs more tips? For this post, I was trying hard to focus on just this one process for pitching. I was going to mention my process for recording amd keeping track of my ideas, but decided that could best be handled in a different post some other time.
Alicia Rades says
Not necessarily, but I think some more ideas on how to control your idea or even spin it for different audiences would be really useful for bloggers. You can save those ideas for a different post, though.
I like that you’re planning on using a solid example from your experiences. I think it will make this post a strong one.
Jessi Stanley says
Thanks for the clarification, Alicia. Focusing and managing too many ideas are things I struggle with all the time, so I see the potential for many future posts on these problems.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Jessi!
Really like this. 🙂 One of the things — or perhaps THE thing — that comes up most often with my mentoring students is “how do I pick just one idea?!” So I know there’s an audience out there who would want (and need) to read this post.
Sophie Lizard says
Yes, Jessi! Love this. Well pitched. 🙂
Sabita Saleem says
Many congrats to all winners 🙂 I’m eagerly waiting to see all the articles.
Best wishes all.
Katherine Swarts says
Can hardly wait to read your winning guest post, Jessi!
Lily says
Headline:
A Radical Way To Beat Procrastination: Rip It Out From The Roots
Intro:
The term “radical” has come to mean “extreme,” but it really comes from the Latin for “of the root.” To address something in a radical way means looking at, and changing, its very root. Freelancers who struggle with procrastination may need a radical solution: find the roots of your procrastination, and attack it there.
Subhead One:
Root One: “I’d Really Rather Not…”
“I’d Really Rather Not”-type procrastinators know they have something due, and they know they should do it, but they really don’t want to do it, so they put it off. At the root, this isn’t about time management, but self-awareness: figuring out what’s at the root of your negative feelings, and how to power through.
Subhead Two:
Root Two: “It Crept Up On Me!”
Some people just don’t have a strong internal clock, and don’t really “feel” or notice the hours slipping away. If you find yourself looking at your clock or calendar and realizing you’ve lost valuable working time, or even let a deadline sneak up on you, using timers and other time-management systems will help you rip your procrastination out from the roots.
Subhead Three:
Root Three: “I Work Better Under Pressure.”
“I work better under pressure” is a lie procrastinators tell themselves to excuse or explain procrastination. Replacing it with a more honest phrase, like “I’m proud of my ability to cram” or “I need a looming deadline to force my self-discipline” will help you find and attack the roots of your procrastination.
Subhead Four:
Root Four: “I Don’t Take Orders From Anyone.”
Most of us got into this because we love to write, but a strange thing happens when we mix work and pleasure. If the external pressure of an editor’s deadline, or even just seeing a writing project on your “to-do” list alongside other work tasks makes you start putting it off, this resistance to outside demands may be at the root of your procrastination.
Subhead Five:
Root Five: “If It’s Not Done, It’s Not Horrible.”
Perfectionism is paralyzing, and paralysis leads to procrastination. If you’re struggling to get through a project out of a fear of failure or even shame about how long you’ve already put it off, mental tricks like self-compassion and “satisficing” will give you tools to hack away at the roots of this procrastination.
Subhead Six:
Cultivating A Healthy Garden
Once you’ve eliminated the “weeds” of procrastination by tearing them up by their roots, you have fertile ground to start planting healthier habits. Finding the time management solution that works for you will help prevent that pesky procrastination from poking back up through the ground.
BIO: I’m a “digital native” who’s spent more than half my life blogging and immersed in online communities. I’m currently working as a community facilitator and freelance writer based in San Francisco. As a teacher and tutor, I also have years of experience teaching writers of all ages how to cultivate healthy practices in their writing and elsewhere.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Lily!
So long as you write this post about freelance blogging and not just freelancing in general, then I’m all for it. And I like that you stuck with an overall theme! 🙂
Sophie Lizard says
What Lauren said, plus: great pitch!
Lily says
Lauren,
Thanks for your feedback! I tried to keep things general to avoid wordiness in the 1-2 sentence pitch, but yes, the article will focus on freelance blogging – I see now that this specific focus fades from the pitch, and I thank you for pointing that out.
Lily
Derek Thompson says
HEADLINE: How to Get Ripped Off as a Freelance Writer (Or How to Avoid It)
We love our clients, but every once in a while – like the coffee cream I accidentally took once from a chocolate box – you can end up with a shitty one. Let me walk you through my hall of shame, now rebranded as a hall of learning, and prevent it from happening to you.
SUBHEADINGS:
The Unpaid Invoice
Clients who ignore you, how I turned detective, and how I temporarily became Liam Neeson. How I lost the plot and sacked a different client.
The Job That Continues to Rise, Unlike the Dough
Just one more tweak can tip a job into unprofitability. Drawing the line between edits and a rewrite.
Jam Tomorrow
You have to eat now as well as in that shiny future. Rest assured, all their other bills are being paid (website hosting, for one).
Feed Me, Feed Me
Ideas factories are still churning out products, which have a value and need to be paid for. Writers are not social workers or foster parents.
TCQS
Time, cost, quality and scope – lessons from project management. Squeeze any one and you affect all the others.
Strategies to Ensure You Get Paid
Have a contract. Research your client online (for which you need proper contact information). If in doubt, send your work over as a JPEG first until the money clears. They can see the text but not copy or amend it.
Why me?
A freelancer with an identity crisis, I write non-fiction, fiction and comedy – sometimes all in the one piece. I’m also a tremendous recycler, so no personal screw-up is off-limits if it helps the story.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hey, Derek!
I loved your “The Job That Continues to Rise, Unlike the Dough” sub-heading. Made me chuckle. 🙂 (Though with “Jam Tomorrow” and “Feed Me, Feed Me” being your following subheads, it almost seems like your overall “theme” should be food-based…)
The only problem I have with your pitch is that it didn’t mention blogging/bloggers once (not even in the title!).
Sophie Lizard says
This pitch made me hungry. 😉 I agree with Lauren — a little more focus on the freelance blogging perspective and this is a good one.
Derek Thompson says
Thanks both for your feedback.
I drew my examples from both blogging and general freelancing, so I agree that’d need to be refocused. I hadn’t seen the food theme developing with the subheads – that’s definitely worth playing with to give it a cohesion. Perhaps the heading could be ‘How To Go Hungry With Freelance Blogging (Or How To Stay Well Fed)’.
Good luck to everyone.
Laura Yeager says
I’ve given this pitch a new headline. See below:
Dear Sophie Lizard:
Your frequent notes of encouragement and freelance guidance are wonderful. Thank you for keeping me in the freelancing loop. I’ve considered entering your Pitchfest, but was too intimidated to until now. See pitch below:
“Misfortune’s Silver Lining”
People with illnesses can and should blog about their illness. MS, cancer, asthma, diabetes, heart disease, schizophrenia—any kind of illness is fair game. I just recovered from breast cancer. I plan to write about this experience just as soon as I have enough distance on it.
Years ago, I wrote a blog on bipolar illness for empowher.com, a women’s health website. I wrote two bipolar posts a week and was paid $25 for each post. I kept up the blog for six months. During this time, I learned a great deal about myself and my issue. I would encourage anyone with an illness or disease to consider writing about it.
There are several benefits of writing about your illness.
USING YOUR EXPERTISE
In many ways, you’re an expert on the malady. You might not be a doctor, but you have priceless experience in living with the disease.
BEING A GOOD NEIGHBOR
You can help others deal with their illness issues. What better way is there to reach out to struggling sick people?
KNOWING THYSELF
Writing about your problem helps you cope with it. It’s pretty much a known fact; writing helps people deal with their life issues.
MAKING MAGIC
You can put your own spin on the sickness, choosing to make it funny or intensely black or somewhere in between. Presto!
GETTING BACK
It’s nice to receive something from the universe for having to endure a disease i.e. cash. Every little bit helps.
RECEIVING WONDERFUL SURPRISES
You’ll discover new knowledge about your illness. In the process of dealing with what you know best, you’ll learn more.
I’ve been writing for more than 30 years, and I’ve been living with bipolar illness since 1991. I developed breast cancer in 2011. I have the writing ability, experience and expertise to write this post for you.
Sophie, I hope you’d like to help me turn this idea into a reality.
Sincerely,
Laura Yeager
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Laura!
This is still more-or-less a fine idea; however, I think that Sophie’s initial comment — http://beafreelanceblogger.com/100-dollar-blog-pitch/#comment-53512 — still applies: How would writing about their illnesses help bloggers earn money?
Michelle Vroom says
Hi all,
This is the first time I’ve participated in Pitchfest – thanks for the opportunity! There are a lot of posts out there about how freelance blogging can ultimately release you from your 9-5 job. But for those of us who still have to work full-time to pay the bills, here’s a post about how that can work to your benefit… and why your company should thank you for it.
Looking forward to all constructive feedback! Best of luck to everyone participating.
Headline: Why Freelance Blogging is the Best Thing You Can Do For Your Career
Alternate Headlines:
How Freelance Blogging Can Support Your 9-5
Freelance Bloggers: A Company’s Most Valuable Asset
Freelance Bloggers: Don’t Quit Your 9-5 Just Yet
Are you a freelance blogger with a full-time job? Wish you could write for a living but can’t afford to just yet?
If you answered yes, then here’s what I have to say: Good.
Wait. Did she just say good?
Let me explain. As a freelance blogger, you’re in a unique position to help your company succeed. Here’s how:
Subhead 1: You think with your left and right brain.
Bloggers have to master a variety of analytical skills – SEO, web analytics, conversion rates – while developing a creative angle for the next blog post. Chances are you’re using both sides of your brain without even realizing it and I’ll discuss how you can harness that power in the workplace.
Subhead 2: You look human.
Let’s face it: when we blog, we’re putting our innermost thoughts and feelings on display for the entire world. Some may say that is a detriment to your career, but I’ll explain why showing your human side can actually make your company look human too.
Subhead 3: You know what the real stories are (and how to find them).
Bloggers know what makes a good story and which stories will best captivate readers. Here I’ll discuss how you can tap into those talents to help your company find its story and tell it in a way that resonates with customers/clients.
Subhead 4: You’ve got the drive to make sh*t happen.
Even though you work full-time, you still found time to start a blog, didn’t you? I’ll show you how that same drive can enable you to do more for your company without putting in extra hours.
Subhead 5: You know how to market yourself like a pro.
If you’re a freelance blogger with a full-time job, you add credibility to your company – simply by association. I’ll talk about how marketing your own blog can generate new business leads and drive results for your company while garnering respect among your boss and colleagues.
I’m Michelle Vroom, a public relations professional who started blogging a few years ago after my parents split up. I spend my days marketing my company and my nights marketing myself. At first blogging and my career seemed like two separate worlds – until I realized that both work in tandem to benefit my personal brand.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Love it, Michelle. 🙂
Sophie Lizard says
Michelle, yes, this is excellent. Damn, it’s gonna be hard to choose one winner!
Michelle Vroom says
Thanks, Sophie – you guys do have a difficult task ahead of you! There were a lot of great pitches 🙂
Michelle Vroom says
Thank you, Lauren!
Michelle Vroom says
Sophie/Lauren – I’m in the US and it’s 9pm ET here…hoping I can still qualify even though I know we’re in different time zones.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Yep. You made it! Your pitch came in way before I put the “This contest is closed” comment up. 🙂
Michelle Vroom says
Whew 🙂 Thanks so much!
Adrienne says
Hi everybody. I really would love some feedback on my pitch. Here it is
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Headline 1
Break free of your no follow-through writing habits with 12 key strategies
Headline 2
Get Over Your No Follow-Through Habits and Freelance Blog Like a Pro [12 Foolproof Tips]
Intro:
You wake up with a sparkle in your eyes. Putting on your figurative bandana and black war paint you sit down to write. Staring at a blank page your head begins to clutter with ideas. Grabbing your head in frustration you say screw it, and decide to watch your favorite cat videos instead.
This is your brain on no follow-through!
Subheadings:
Daily Brain Dumps
Start each writing session by letting out all your thoughts without editing or grammar checks. I provide 3 tools you can use to clear mental clutter.
Give Yourself Dabble Time
Explore and engage without restraint. The goal is not about completing anything but just find ways to let your creative expression out.
Keep A Notebook Under Your Pillow
When you are sleeping your mind is processing the day and many times ideas bubble over. Capture those great ideas in your notebook they will give you direction for your next writing session.
Get Over The Sparkle Feeling And Get To Work
The fact is creating is little about that inspirational whistle while you work feeling, no pain, no gain. To see the benefits you have to push through and put in the work.
Stop Multitasking on The Internet
Having 10 different tabs open on your browser is sending you into 10 different directions, making it easy to get distracted and lose focus. Here are tools you can use to prevent this behavior.
Track Your Time
Awareness births change. Tracking your time keeps you accountable on how your spend your minutes, how many cat videos are you watching truly?
Bio + Reason Why I Want To Write This Post:
My name is Adrienne Bennett, I am a freelance writer who is passionate about the ways words can help people create, connect, and inspire overall growth. I am writing this post for every freelance blogger out there who struggles with creative overload. You want to produce consistent good work but you may lack a system to complete your projects.
Adrienne says
I just to let everyone know.. I did submit the pitch before the deadline once already but I have not heard any feedback.. I really wanna grow as a writer so I am submitted it again. I see that the time stamp is after the deadline. I hope that is not an issue.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Hi, Adrienne!
Just so you know for future Pitchfests: It sometimes takes a day or two to receive feedback. Sophie and I go through and reply to each entrant personally; however, with so many bloggers pitching ideas at once, that can take up considerable time. As it is, I’ve spent the last 2 hours and 21 minutes replying to entrants, and I’ve yet to finish! :O
Adrienne says
I can see you definitely you both are working hard and have big job on your hands with this contest Lauren: )
I just got itchy fingers over here wanting to hear feedback…LOL My bad on double posting my pitch. I am a newbie to this whole contest. But I am learning fast. Thank you again for all that you are doing : )
Heiddi says
Hi all. Looks like a very productive pitchfest this time around. Missed the deadline this time, but my pitch will be ready for the next round. And I can’t wait. Good luck everyone! 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Looking forward to reading your entry come October and/or December, Heiddi! 🙂
Preethi says
Title: Let’s use technology to get the extra mileage from freelance blogging
Alt Title: Technology is making life easy why not use them for blogging?
Are you finding it hard being your own boss and not being able to draw the line between your personal and professional life? Don’t feel lost. There are convenient and inexpensive ways to manage this with minimal time and effort. Take the help of technological tools out there.
1. Learn from the experts:
“Bloggers” who make a decent income have e-books, courses, a side career as a keynote speaker, or even software. Selling ads is attractive, because it’s passive income, but you can usually make 3-10X more money using the same “ad space” to sell your own products and services or even promote an affiliate product. I shall discuss how effectively and easily software solutions can help you create more outreach and bring in money.
2. Pitch for the big clients:
Look out for clients who hire a lot of freelancers or who are majorly dependent on your work or who are from big companies. Why specifically these types of clients you may ask. The reason being you need repeat work, reasonable rates and recognition. Here I shall elaborate on tools and methods that can be used for catching the big fishes out there.
3. Be Smart Be Social:
Here I shall be discussing on the important tools in different networking sites that could be used to get you out there and reach your potential clients and more audience for your work. Like in Twitter you have tweetlater, Twitalyzer, tweetstats, etc. which can help you systematize your work.
4. Manage your finances:
I shall mention the financial management tools, such as freshbook, harvest and zoho-invoice, which can track income, expenses, invoices and past-due invoices, estimated taxes, and other financial tasks which usually seem overwhelming can be made simple and easy.
5. Tools that can save you tons of time and energy:
Keeping data backed up in multiple ways or app which would help track your daily schedule or how much money you are earning per hour from various gigs or the software that blocks distractions shall be discussed here.
I am a market researcher and new to blogging, I must say BAFB is one of the reasons I decided to give blogging career a start. I would love to elaborate on each of the above mentioned bulletin points in details which I am sure could be very informative for your readers.
Sophie Lizard says
I like this idea, but I’d prefer to see you re-pitch it in a future Pitchfest when you have tried your suggestions out in your own blogging career — that way you’ll have results to report along with the tips. 🙂
Clara Mathews says
Headline: Good Contracts Make Good Clients
You finally landed that big blogging client. They agreed to the fee you want. But wait, where is the contract? Don’t worry they are such nice people, surely nothing can go wrong. Or can it?
WordPress…SEO…These are important, but one of the most important lessons you can learn as a freelance blogger is about service contracts.
Subheadings:
Why a Freelance Blogger Needs to Have a Contract
NEVER Work Without a Signed Contract
Elements of a Basic Freelance Blogger Contract
Terms of Service, Scope of Work and Other Small Print
Who I am and Who I Should for Be a Freelance Blogger
I have been a freelance blogger and copywriter for more than four years. I recently learned from a bad experience with a client that you should always have a written contract or service agreement. This will help to avoid scope creep, too many revisions and worst of all, not being paid.
Sophie Lizard says
This is a topic any freelancing blog can almost always use a fresh post on, but it *has* to be fresh. You’ve learned useful lessons from your recent experience — to publish this on BAFB, though, we’d need to see a unique perspective in your pitch.
(BTW I’m not saying you don’t have a unique perspective. You probably do, but it isn’t shining through in your pitch here. And you can better at that with practice; see http://beafreelanceblogger.com/writer-website-voice/ for some ideas to emphasise your voice and perspective in your pitches.)
Clara Mathews says
I guess my unique perspective would be that having a simple work for hire service agreement reduce stress and misunderstandings on both sides. For me, this is especially true when working with former colleagues, friends and (cringe) family members.
Also, freelancers often think they have to pay a lawyer to create an official legal document. Hiring a lawyer is great, but for most freelance bloggers, there are contract templates on websites like Freelancers Union that work just fine.
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
THIS CONTEST IS NOW CLOSED!!
Big thanks to everyone who entered!
Sophie and I will continue to reply to everyone who’s pitched. If you haven’t received a reply yet, just wait. One of the benefits of entering is receiving a personal reply from one or both of us — but, with so many entrants, sometimes that can take a little time. 😉
Subscribe to the comments and keep an eye out! WE WILL BE ANNOUNCING THE WINNER WITHIN THE NEXT COUPLE DAYS!
Thank you again! Great job, Everyone!!
Matt Read says
Very cool idea. I look forward to being a part of this next month. It seems like a great ways for unpaid bloggers to break on through to paid gigs. thanks for all your doing.
Sophie Lizard says
Hope we’ll see you pitching at the next Pitchfest, Matt! It’ll start in mid-October. 🙂
Sophie Lizard says
THE WINNERS!
Winner of the $100 prize on publication of her post:
* Jessi Stanley, pitching “Be the Boss of Your Ideas: A Pitching System for Bloggers with Wandering Minds” — see her pitch here: http://beafreelanceblogger.com/100-dollar-blog-pitch/#comment-54092
Two runners-up who each win a group mentoring session on publication of their post:
* Michelle Vroom, pitching “How Freelance Blogging Supports Your 9-5” — see her pitch here: http://beafreelanceblogger.com/100-dollar-blog-pitch/#comment-54201
* Lily, pitching “A Radical Way to Beat Procrastination” — see her pitch here: http://beafreelanceblogger.com/100-dollar-blog-pitch/#comment-54095
There are several other entrants whose pitches we feel are ready to use, assuming you tweak them in line with our comments:
* Alicia Rades
* Alison Mansfield
* Issa Mirandilla
* Kara Andersen
* Kat Loveland
* Katherine Swarts
* Kristy
* Lorraine Reguly
* Razwana Wahid
We encourage you to either:
(a) submit your pitch to one of the paying sites in the Ultimate List of Better-Paid Blogging Gigs, or
(b) write up your first draft and send it to lauren@beafreelanceblogger for publication as a traditional, unpaid guest post on Be a Freelance Blogger
Thanks everyone for your pitches and your input on other people’s pitches! The next Pitchfest will be in mid-October, and we hope to see you there. 🙂
Kat Loveland says
Wow! Thanks for liking my pitch. I’ll ponder which one may be best and let you know. Thanks again!
Michelle Vroom says
This is great news – thank you Sophie/Lauren for the opportunity! Can’t wait to get started on my post. Congrats to all winners and runnerups!!
Alicia Rades says
Congrats everyone! Sophie and Lauren, thank you for liking my pitch! I thought my idea totally flopped this time, so it’s nice to have the encouragement.
Razwana says
Yay! Congratulations to all ! I was totally going to send the post into Lauren in any case – and now I have an invitation 🙂 🙂 🙂
Derek Thompson says
Congratulations to the worthy winners and thanks to everyone for sharing their pitch proposals. It’s been great to see all the different approaches, and it’s made me think more seriously and carefully about how I approach my own blogging (whether for me or for clients). Maybe we should have a roll call of honour thread as people get those blogs written and posted?
If anyone is looking to build their network, I’m happy to connect / follow back.
Twitter: @DerekWriteLines
Blog: http://www.alongthewritelines.blogspot.co.uk
LinkedIn: uk.linkedin.com/in/derekthewriter/
Katherine Swarts says
I’m tremendously flattered for the mention!
Jessi Stanley says
Wow. I feel so honored. Thank you so much, Sophie and Lauren!
Michelle Vroom says
Congrats Jessi!!
Issa Mirandilla says
Congratulations to Jessi, Michelle, and Lily. Great job, everyone! 🙂
Malithi Weerakkody says
Congratulations to the winners! Good job Jessi, Michelle, and Lily. Can’t wait to read your posts.
Thank you Sophie for this wonderful opportunity. I certainly learned a lot from this. And a big thank you goes to every one who offered feedback on my pitch. You guys are great!
Cheers! 🙂
Kristy says
Congrats everyone! I can’t wait to read your article, Jessi. And thank you to Sophie and Lauren for a kick-ass opportunity to share our ideas, see those of others and how they transform, and for feedback on all of it. This is such a valuable event for freelancers!
Lorraine Reguly says
I agree. It’s wonderful to see what can happen when so many great minds and ideas come together. 🙂
I enjoyed reading everyone’s comments and watching the interactions between all of you, especially the “power users”! 😉
It was also nice to meet some new connections. Thanks for letting me be a part of this, Sophie and Lauren!
I look forward to reading the winning post, and to further interactions with many BAFB community members again.
Nicely done, everyone!
Laura Yeager says
This is a very good way to learn how to write a pitch. Thank you, Lauren and Sophie. Glad I was a part of it.
Pinar Tarhan says
My sincere congrats to the winner and runner-ups!! 🙂
Lily says
Great news – I’m flattered! What are the next steps toward the group mentoring session?
Sophie Lizard says
Hi Lily, when we prep your draft for publication I’ll add you to the guest list for the next group session – we usually hold them on the last weekend of the month. 🙂
Lauren Tharp, BAFB Community Manager says
Congratulations, Everyone!! 😀 I hope to see you all again come October when we run our NEXT Pitchfest!
Kara Andersen says
Congrats to all the winners! Looking forward to reading all of the fantastic articles that were pitched here.
Amy Dunn Moscoso says
Congrats everyone. So many great ideas and always a very fun contest. I look forward to reading these posts.